turgsh01
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You're dwelling on the minds of crazy ppl...
Be careful, they say it's contagious.
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Be careful, they say it's contagious.
LWtbo
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I hope Arc 2 makes more plot sense than Arc 1 do's the MC often selfish, quick to judge and come to the wrong conclusion,
Gets angry for fuck all reason, slow on the uptake and even slower to learn. has no sense of urgency.
(paraphrasing) MC "oh never mind i'll take Amber that urgent ring in a couple of days time".
and the plots have more holes than a colander but thats ok because there writen with Porn logic anyway.
(paraphrasing) Selene "Grandaddy wants MC alive because he needs him in the family".
Followed by Porn logic time (paraphrasing) Selene "Theresa take you panties off or I blow the MC face off".
How the fuck does thretening to kill someone Selene the MC and her would be blackmail victim Theresa.
Should know its a empty threat that Selene can't or darn't carry out even supossed to work.
Simple its a Porn Logic plot.
The game is Enertaining some times and cringely stupid the rest.
I really hope Arc 2 isn't so stupid and the MC has grown up a little.
Gets angry for fuck all reason, slow on the uptake and even slower to learn. has no sense of urgency.
(paraphrasing) MC "oh never mind i'll take Amber that urgent ring in a couple of days time".
and the plots have more holes than a colander but thats ok because there writen with Porn logic anyway.
(paraphrasing) Selene "Grandaddy wants MC alive because he needs him in the family".
Followed by Porn logic time (paraphrasing) Selene "Theresa take you panties off or I blow the MC face off".
How the fuck does thretening to kill someone Selene the MC and her would be blackmail victim Theresa.
Should know its a empty threat that Selene can't or darn't carry out even supossed to work.
Simple its a Porn Logic plot.
The game is Enertaining some times and cringely stupid the rest.
I really hope Arc 2 isn't so stupid and the MC has grown up a little.
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turgsh01
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At least the dev writes far better English than you.
I think they are troll,on every thread there is angry face on the op lol
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turgsh01
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You're criticizing a game harshly in which you very clearly couldn't possibly do better yourself. You blame dyslexia on your lack of ability to at least use spell check which as far as I know every browser have available by default.
Oh, and thanks for reminding me, I forgot to add you to my list as well.
Why do people expect bestselling-author level of writing and logic in an amateur VN? Certainly, MC is immature and foolish and does things that make no sense. Some of these are part of his character as a young, dumb, and impulsive kid, and some are just slip-ups by the author not being a professional. That's just how it is in the world of amateur writing, and it is better to just learn to look past it and not over-analyze everything to death, or you are going to be disappointed by a lot of the works here, because there are very few professional authors on this site.
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Because some people got butthurt, and the facepalm emoji was replaced by the site owners with the red angry face. So now people still use that but it conveys a different message altogether. Of course it doesn't make sense, because it was supposed to be "I can't even..." and now it's become "I hate you and your family".
PhineasFlynn
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Just roll with mouse ball or try use tap PageUp
DasImp
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Hmmm thanks for conforming it should work normaly, might have something to do with URM then...
Yeah, we didn't disable it, I hate that shit in games too, so I don't do that.
XeroZero000
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Is the MC some kind of cult leader figure in the making?
Everyone seems to want to fuck him for some reason, and he gives me a cult leader vibe, ngl.
I just finished Arc 1, and I felt it toned down near the end, though.
Everyone seems to want to fuck him for some reason, and he gives me a cult leader vibe, ngl.
I just finished Arc 1, and I felt it toned down near the end, though.
afterlights
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There's some humor sprinkled throughout the game about that. Like winking at the trope.
Episode 1 is around 9 hours long without skipping. I feel like stuff like this should be in the front page, because it's a bit insane... I even tested by just skipping everything and it takes around 15 minutes.
Badjourasmix
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This has to be one of the most underrated games in this forum.
Arc 1 is 4 hours long. its been timed by numerous people and that's the average.(that's with reading everything)
If it takes you 9 hours to read it (no offense meant to your reading ability), I don't know what to say.
it doesn't need to be said on the front page, really. Its a completed arc. I don't see the issue. Usually people want a long game.
I'll make a note on the OP, just in case, but it will say that it's 4 hours.
If it takes you 9 hours to read it (no offense meant to your reading ability), I don't know what to say.
it doesn't need to be said on the front page, really. Its a completed arc. I don't see the issue. Usually people want a long game.
I'll make a note on the OP, just in case, but it will say that it's 4 hours.
well, there are still at least a few months of updates for this arc to go. were headed that way, though. id say were 3/4 of the way with arc 2.
short answer: cant give a definitive answer right now.