VN Ren'Py Ravenous [Arc 2 Ep.16 Beta] [Lament Entertainment]

[Badjourasmix]

Doesn't matter, could be a few minutes, the most important time is our own, not a fictional characters and it doesn't have to be fucking, but it needs to have something for the player. Unless you have grade A writing, an erotic game needs erotic content or it just becomes a chore.

The last 2 updates have been a waste of time

For the most part I agree with you, at the end of the day we play these games for the erotic content. But I don't think the updates were a waste of time, this update gives us a little more context on what is going on in the town and I can see things with the girls escalating very quickly in the next updates since they all pretty much decided to start pursuing the mc.

 

[LamentEntertainment]

Doesn't matter, could be a few minutes, the most important time is our own, not a fictional characters and it doesn't have to be fucking, but it needs to have something for the player. Unless you have grade A writing, an erotic game needs erotic content or it just becomes a chore.

The last 2 updates have been a waste of time

its been said multiple times this is a slow burn story. sorry if that steps on your toes, but you are free to play the other games on this site.
Everybody has what they like and dont like. i bare no ill will toward people for that. This story will stay the course.

 

[andupreda]

Old saves not working ? Wtf , do we have to start all over again when is a new update ?

 

[LamentEntertainment]

Old saves not working ? Wtf , do we have to start all over again when is a new update ?

Yea, not very far in the story. fixing all of the grammar mistakes messed up the saves. its not on every update. 0.085 had no issues.

 

[Darknesssilent]

So let me get this straight the dev adds a les scene and for the reasons to add the mother eat a person and needs to eat pussy to get rid of the craving that is the dumbest idea i have ever seen and for that fact game is going on ignore.

 

[guardianfather]

Shoes on the bed, what is she a caveman! Gross!

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I wouldn't say gross; the sheets would get sullied though. But it's rather strange to wear shoes inside the house.

 

[ArturiousDesign]

I wouldn't say gross; the sheets would get sullied though. But it's rather strange to wear shoes inside the house.

I think shoes on the bed are super gross. Who knows what you walked in then put your dirty shoes on my bed. Spit, Dogshit, puke. nah, foh!

 

[joryh]

Single Again will drive you up the wall with all of the hard pause's

I swear, the MC in that game has a robotic fainting couch set to follow him everywhere he goes so he can wilt on it every time one of the girls looks at him through smoky eyelashes.

 

[Notheonlyone]

I think shoes on the bed are super gross. Who knows what you walked in then put your dirty shoes on my bed. Spit, Dogshit, puke. nah, foh!

i on the other hand love shoes in the bed especially heels

 

[SuperPerv96]

Could somebody please tell me if this is the MC's mom?

 

[Hellster]

Could somebody please tell me if this is the MC's mom? View attachment 2194436

If you had played it, you would know that yes it is

 

[Hellster]

I wouldn't say gross; the sheets would get sullied though. But it's rather strange to wear shoes inside the house.

Not sure how that's strange, nearly everyone i'm sure wears shoes in the house, except for asian countries anyway, walking around barefoot would make your feet filthy.

 

[SuperPerv96]

If you had played it, you would know that yes it is

Thanks for your answer! how much content theres with her?

 

[rkdx2]

Even if Mom and sis were in a relationship, MC would be joining them. They are allowing him to join their relationship. Totally not NTR.

I've complained about NTR at times, but I don't see how the MC stumbling onto an existing 'relationship' is NTR. They were doing this before he showed up, he's not involved with either ATM and it's not just happening for the sexy time lulz.

I think you are confusing NTR with Cheating. For NTR, it doesn't matter who is in a relationship with whom. In general, what matters is that a connection (which the MC either had, or on some level desired) is (or is found to have already been) usurped by another character in a sexual manner. The MC is displaced, and the object of his desire (of whatever kind) is taken from him.

Complicating this is the fact that for games, the MC's perspective is much less important than the player's. So in this case, you have two characters that are clearly built up as love interests for the player, suddenly being revealed to already have been taken. And yes, exactly, you are only joining their relationship, meaning that you become just an add-on; your role as central character, as harem leader, as the primary love interest for two of the love interests in this erotic VN, has been usurped. QED NTR*

That said, I know it's an incredibly subjective topic, but I hope this post helped to shed some light on another perspective.



*However, it's a rather weak NTR, meaning that not only will it alienate strict NTR-haters, it won't even do much for a lot of NTR-lovers.

 

[Big Daddy]

Shoes on the bed, what is she a caveman! Gross!

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<<HE WALKED ALL OVER WITH HIS DIRTY BOOTS. OVER THE CRISP WHITE SHEETS OF MY BED THAT I'VE JUST MADE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!>>

 

[guardianfather]

I think shoes on the bed are super gross. Who knows what you walked in then put your dirty shoes on my bed. Spit, Dogshit, puke. nah, foh!

Which is the reason why wearing shoes in the house is weird. You don't want "spit, dogshit, puke" on the floor either.

Not sure how that's strange, nearly everyone i'm sure wears shoes in the house, except for asian countries anyway, walking around barefoot would make your feet filthy.

Think for a minute. Your logic for bringing the shit inside, is to not get dirty? Ok.

 

[andupreda]

You guys are nuts .. MC mom is eating humans and you find super gross wearing shoes on bed ... You need to understand is just a game and think outside the box

 

[Munchking]

I think you are confusing NTR with Cheating. For NTR, it doesn't matter who is in a relationship with whom. In general, what matters is that a connection (which the MC either had, or on some level desired) is (or is found to have already been) usurped by another character in a sexual manner. The MC is displaced, and the object of his desire (of whatever kind) is taken from him.

In this context he has been there for like a day, and has shown next to no interest other than thinking they look good. In every way of looking at it he is the interloper in the situation. Even now he's more concerned with why they're doing it.

If this suddenly came about 7 hours of gameplay in after he's been pursuing one of them, then yeah. But come on.

 

[obibobi]

its been said multiple times this is a slow burn story. sorry if that steps on your toes, but you are free to play the other games on this site.
Everybody has what they like and dont like. i bare no ill will toward people for that. This story will stay the course.

Play other games is dismissive of the point, my criticism wasn't as basic as "I don't like this", it's that if you're going to have a slow burn the story needs to be able to stand on its own.

 

[obibobi]

Complicating this is the fact that for games, the MC's perspective is much less important than the player's. So in this case, you have two characters that are clearly built up as love interests for the player, suddenly being revealed to already have been taken.

You're not giving the correct definition, NTR is sexual jealousy, that is it, there is no other interepration.

People pushing so hard for this idea that 2 females cause that are typically being anal or trolling. The natural dislike of a man sleeping with the woman is that he could get her pregnant, now they could be using protection or either one could be infertile but that doesn't change about how it makes most men feel. A woman can't get a woman pregnant, so most men find 2 women together a turn on because they see it as a chance to have both.