I would most likely alter/add/include some dialogue to add everyday things, and perhaps whats going on now in their lives, intersts, activities, etc..I mean, at least one of the LIs was also putting sone secondary effort into banging her daughter, so there's that....
That's actually a good point. Had you spent a bunch of time developing secondary character depth the plot advancement would have slowed even more, so that's a tough pickle.
That makes me curious though. If I may ask you a game development craft question-- If you had to start over again and could remedy the "heavy mistake", how would you do it? Would you just put additional content in early, or replace some of the current content with character-building, or reduce the size of the cast? And if one of the latter to, what/who would have been mostly likely chopped (or shifted to Arc 2 or whatever)?
Not just single minded conversation.
Scenes would probably be 10-15 renders longer, but i would make it flow properly.
In turn, would make slightly longer updates.
I think that everything that's in there now, belongs and fits, I just don't like that its the sole topic of conversation a lot of the time.
These are things that I'm learning so I can implement them onto the next project.
I hope that answered your question.