VN Ren'Py Ravenous [Arc 2 Ep. 8] [Lament Entertainment]

[Beduin123]

Another thing that puzzles me in this game is how weak, pathetic and inefficient is the Ultimate Evil in this game. The cultists cannot figure out rather an obvious mole (the police woman Theresa) among themselves. They cannot act efficiently on anything they do. And on the top of that, their leader, the horrendous murderous 300-years-old witch (who is supposed to be wise and cunning) completely falls in love with a teenage boy like a typical light headed school girl and starts doing everything that the boy askes her to do.
Looks a bit like a sentimental Bollywood drama to me.

 

[LamentEntertainment]

Another thing that puzzles me in this game is how weak, pathetic and inefficient is the Ultimate Evil in this game. The cultists cannot figure out rather an obvious mole (the police woman Theresa) among themselves. They cannot act efficiently on anything they do. And on the top of that, their leader, the horrendous murderous 300-years-old witch (who is supposed to be wise and cunning) completely falls in love with a teenage boy like a typical light headed school girl and starts doing everything that the boy askes her to do.
Looks a bit like a sentimental Bollywood drama to me.

I guess I'm just a shitty dev, huh? I'm glad a few people like what I'm doing.
Myself included.
I'm sure you can find other games to spend more time on if you don't like so much about this one.
I apologize for it not being up to so many peoples standards.
You do, however , have the option to walk away.
This is my very first project, and I'm quite happy with the way it has turned out so far.

Also, I'm a guy. and I have been a teenager before.
NORMAL teenagers wont jump at the thought of having sex with their family, and they also wouldn't be ready to bed a bunch of women twice their age. I'm sure they would feel intimidated.
Unless you grew up in a whorehouse, I don't see how people don't understand that.
As far as the "Ultimate evil", I'm happy with it. Moles are Moles in every situation. If people knew they were moles, moles wouldn't exist.
If I took the time to render and write , and show all of that, I'm sure people would bitch "waaaah, too much writing, no sex for my peepee"

Like I said, I'm sorry you don't like the game/story. At the end of the day, I'm making myself happy with an accomplishment of my own.

 

[Beduin123]

I guess I'm just a shitty dev, huh? I'm glad a few people like what I'm doing.
Myself included.
I'm sure you can find other games to spend more time on if you don't like so much about this one.
I apologize for it not being up to so many peoples standards.
You do, however , have the option to walk away.
This is my very first project, and I'm quite happy with the way it has turned out so far.

Also, I'm a guy. and I have been a teenager before.
NORMAL teenagers wont jump at the thought of having sex with their family, and they also wouldn't be ready to bed a bunch of women twice their age. I'm sure they would feel intimidated.
Unless you grew up in a whorehouse, I don't see how people don't understand that.
As far as the "Ultimate evil", I'm happy with it. Moles are Moles in every situation. If people knew they were moles, moles wouldn't exist.
If I took the time to render and write , and show all of that, I'm sure people would bitch "waaaah, too much writing, no sex for my peepee"

Like I said, I'm sorry you don't like the game/story. At the end of the day, I'm making myself happy with an accomplishment of my own.

I didn't say I didn't like the story at all. I like the graphics and I enjoy the characters, especially the lolis, very much. I just pointed out at the problems that you have with this game. It is up to you how you react. You can accept the criticism and try to improve your skills. Or you can behave like a sulky teenager and keep saying that if somebody doesn't like your game they can f*ck off. In response we, the community of this site, can also say that if you don't like people providing some healthy constructive criticism, you don't have to be here and read our comments.

The MC behaves as he does with everybody. Not only with family members but for example with Jettica. The amount of teasing in your game is overwhelming. All the girls walk around with almost no clothes on, sleep with the MC virtually naked and tell him how much they want to fuck him. Every third render or so is somebody's ass or tits. And the MC just goes "Na-ah, we'll do it next time/tomorrow/next year". He does not sound confused or scared. He looks as just not that much interested in sex. You can make a great story without sex at all. But in this game there is so much promise of that and so little gain, that's the problem.

Theresa doesn't hide at all. Is it so difficult for the cult to trace her movements to come to a simple conclusion? She is one of the few who didn't drink blood after all, which makes her less dependent on the cult's business. She sleeps with Isabella who is the enemy of the cult. And they don't have even slightest suspicion, are they that dumb?
Also I find it hard to believe that in such a small town some people do not know the mayor, Isabella or some other prominent people as it is clear from the dialogues. I lived in places like that. There people usually know everybody and everything.

It is all just lame excuses.

In the end I very much appreciate what you do. There aren't many good loli/incest games around. I just wish that the stories that the Devs create where coherent and believable (within the fictionary framework of the created world, of course). My criticism is aimed at not making you to abandon what you do, but to improve your writing skills. You cannot please everybody's kinks but you can make the story more believable and more enjoyable.

 

[J.R.]

I didn't say I don't like the story at all....

No you don't. You literally liked almost all the complaining and badmouthing post and reviews here. Also your own posts are only putting the dev and the game down. That's not criticism buddy. Please do yourself a favor and move on, the game is clearly not for you.

 

[Beduin123]

You literally liked almost all the complaining and badmouthing post and reviews here.

Please stop talking bullshit, man.

 

[ropershy]

That may be the most unintentionally ironic statement of all time.

Teenage boys are stupid and behave that way. Pretty sure most females have cracked that Da Vinci Code.

Find me 10 males on Planet Earth who truly understand the hormonal 180's of teenage girls and I will be impressed. (Not know-enough-to-take-advantage-and-manipulate "groomer" levels of understanding, but real understanding that could make them stable and happy at all times.)

If a female is throwing herself at a teenage boy. He isn't going to turn it down. Or say something like " No not tonight Maybe later". That is something A female says or a 40/50 year old man says. Not a teenage boy. That was my point. And it isn't just this Dev. It seems to be nearly all the devs doing this. Hell in one game the dev has the MC behaving as a Loser, Virgin Nerd and a Alpha Dom Bully. Back and forth all within a 10 hour period. Another the MC feels guilty when peeking on a girl changing clothes but then blackmails her for sex? Just to later feeling guilty for peeking on her again and runs to his room?

 

[MalLiz]

I am really starting to wonder if all the devs aren't all females. It just seems none of them know anything about how teenage boys act at all.

If a female is throwing herself at a teenage boy. He isn't going to turn it down. Or say something like " No not tonight Maybe later". That is something A female says or a 40/50 year old man says. Not a teenage boy. That was my point. And it isn't just this Dev. It seems to be nearly all the devs doing this. Hell in one game the dev has the MC behaving as a Loser, Virgin Nerd and a Alpha Dom Bully. Back and forth all within a 10 hour period. Another the MC feels guilty when peeking on a girl changing clothes but then blackmails her for sex? Just to later feeling guilty for peeking on her again and runs to his room?

The level of sheer sexism in those statement is truly and utterly disappointing.

~Liz.

 

[LillyKat]

This story didn't turn the way I thought or wanted it to but that is fine. It isn't my vision. I try not to be a professional writing critic when I am playing these games. There is some valid criticism that falls under subjective preference, but for me, the story is good. It started better and more mysterious and now I am not as into it, but I can't blame that on anything the dev did honestly.

I also understand a point that I think some people miss when being super critical and that is the balance you have to strike when trying to write out these stories. If it is well though out I am sure the devs could go on for days and days more with details and plot lines, but you have to make it so the player is not bogged down to the point of getting bored or frustrated. And you have to balance between action, story depth, getting it told correctly, and trying to fall into the middle of what most people would enjoy, all without compromising your own visions.
There are some TERRIBLE games with little attempt at a story or somewhere the story is just plain terrible, but in this case I firmly believe the dev is trying to make a great story but tell it in a balanced way and not make this a run-of-the-mill have sex with everyone in .01 release game.

All that said, this is one where the models would keep me coming back anyhow. They are super gorgeous. Mainly little sister Erica. Jesus Christ the first release scenes of her were enough to keep me coming back over and over. One of the best loli models IMHO.
Either way, I am glad to have another loli game that's got some depth. I prefer constructive criticism and not just snark but each person can like what they like. Just be nice.

 

[tyrannicpuppy]

This story didn't turn the way I thought or wanted it to but that is fine. It isn't my vision. I try not to be a professional writing critic when I am playing these games. There is some valid criticism that falls under subjective preference, but for me, the story is good. It started better and more mysterious and now I am not as into it, but I can't blame that on anything the dev did honestly.

I also understand a point that I think some people miss when being super critical and that is the balance you have to strike when trying to write out these stories. If it is well though out I am sure the devs could go on for days and days more with details and plot lines, but you have to make it so the player is not bogged down to the point of getting bored or frustrated. And you have to balance between action, story depth, getting it told correctly, and trying to fall into the middle of what most people would enjoy, all without compromising your own visions.
There are some TERRIBLE games with little attempt at a story or somewhere the story is just plain terrible, but in this case I firmly believe the dev is trying to make a great story but tell it in a balanced way and not make this a run-of-the-mill have sex with everyone in .01 release game.

All that said, this is one where the models would keep me coming back anyhow. They are super gorgeous. Mainly little sister Erica. Jesus Christ the first release scenes of her were enough to keep me coming back over and over. One of the best loli models IMHO.
Either way, I am glad to have another loli game that's got some depth. I prefer constructive criticism and not just snark but each person can like what they like. Just be nice.

Erica is amazing. Top two for me. Amber and her are tied for me. Both are gorgeous and loads of fun. Love how mysterious and aloof Amber is and how eager and loving Erica is. Can't wait to see what they both get up to in Arc 2.

 

[Chenzhou]

Looks a bit like a sentimental Bollywood drama to me.

I swear...if LamentEntertainment adds 5 dancing numbers choreographed by

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...I will personally douse your crotch with hot ramen...

I -may- have watched more than one Bollywood movie for research...

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[OhGodNotAgain]

Got to laugh at folks like that most recent review. Because someone else (not the dev) uploaded their work to this site, it must now contain enough smut scenes to please the trolls out for wanking fodder. Doesn't matter if the dev was making a porn game or a story that contains some sex scenes. It's on F95, it must be a proper porn game with all the sex all the time... Grow up folks. If you just need a wank, hit up pornhub or something. Visual Novels should have a story. Otherwise, it's just a slideshow with extra steps.

(Lousy reaction limit)

 

[OhGodNotAgain]

LamentEntertainment I don't know if you ever considered it but what about a character sheet/gallery to help players keep track of who the characters are? Things like names and relations to mc.

 

[LillyKat]

Erica is amazing. Top two for me. Amber and her are tied for me. Both are gorgeous and loads of fun. Love how mysterious and aloof Amber is and how eager and loving Erica is. Can't wait to see what they both get up to in Arc 2.

I agree with that mostly. I wont be too picky with any of these characters for sure. Erica will stay my number one and that seems to work out so we don't have to fight. LOL

 

[tyrannicpuppy]

I agree with that mostly. I wont be too picky with any of these characters for sure. Erica will stay my number one and that seems to work out so we don't have to fight. LOL

100%.

There aren't any LIs in this I'm not eager to pursue. And Erica has the pedigree (?) of being the true first option. She's wanted MC since before the game began. Been holding that torch for a long damn time. She deserves to get what she's been gagging for.

I'm not arguing the merits on any of these lovely ladies. And thankfully, it looks like they're all onboard with making it one great big happy family too. So we don't have to choose. It's gonna be weird for the folks who feel the need to use the Scene Blockers. They're gonna miss so much goodness.

 

[Beduin123]

All that said, this is one where the models would keep me coming back anyhow. They are super gorgeous. Mainly little sister Erica. Jesus Christ the first release scenes of her were enough to keep me coming back over and over. One of the best loli models IMHO.

Erica is hot, no doubt, but if we are talking just about the appearance (not about characters), Jettica and the MC's cousin (I'm bad at remembering the names) are the hottest lolies in this game IMO.

 

[LamentEntertainment]

LamentEntertainment I don't know if you ever considered it but what about a character sheet/gallery to help players keep track of who the characters are? Things like names and relations to mc.

I have a character section posted in my discord. All of the characters are there. I have just made it recently.

 

[LillyKat]

Erica is hot, no doubt, but if we are talking just about the appearance (not about characters), Jettica and the MC's cousin (I'm bad at remembering the names) are the hottest lolies in this game IMO.

Look I think we can agree that none of them would be kicked out of bed for eating potato chips. Glad you like them as much as I do.

 

[jI11jaCksjAkk]

The cousin is a total smokeshow that looks too much like DumbKoala assets for it to be a coincidence...

 

[Beduin123]

that looks too much like DumbKoala assets for it to be a coincidence.

Damn right! I was trying to recollect whom she reminded me

 

[LamentEntertainment]

The cousin is a total smokeshow that looks too much like DumbKoala assets for it to be a coincidence...

It actually is a coincidence lol. I don't know what character you are talking about in Dumbkoala games.
I think dumbkoala is VAM right? doesnt VAM only allow importing of g2-3 characters? I don't remember, honestly.
Either way, Dumbkoala characters are pretty damn hot.
BUT, Katherine does remind me of a character in another game I have played on here, I just cant remember the name.