VN Ren'Py Abandoned Ray's Way [v0.1] [Maid Dev Games]

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JohnJG

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Looks interesting as far characters go, but too early to decide on the story.

The game could definitely do with more tags though.:coffee:
 

joelurmel

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I hope it will not be another game like jen's Dilemma or Bad Bobby where you have to connect your brain with the developper logic...
It's just a wate of time and does not make interest to the game and generate a lot of request of walkthrough.
A good hint interface will be appeciated.
Regards
 

Kukipett

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Well this looks like a shitty sandbox game with events here and there and you rinse and repeat until death takes you from that hell. I have seen the word tasks, so i guess crappy mingames, thats the rotten cherry on top of the shit cake!
 

Ennoch

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"..I'm currently seeking assistance because i don't have a strong command of English.."
This had me crack up. Let's help him invade right now!

By the way. I wouldn't call it even an intro. We are shown a few characters in front of a black background and that is it. The screenshot scenes are not currently in. The guy in one of those is the father.
 
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michael1984

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This is probally the shortest 0.1 version ever

Just a characters introduction :ROFLMAO: They be like hi mc im this person and thats it :ROFLMAO:

Can already tell the updates will probally be equally as short and probally will become a cash grab were if they dont get enough they end it after 2 updates :LOL:
 
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Saint Blackmoor

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"..I'm currently seeking assistance because i don't have a strong command of English.."
This had me crack up. Let's help him invade right now!
This had me cracking up. :LOL: the irony.

Half the fun here is reading comments like these.

I would call it an intro to the characters, not the game so much.
Who posted this? not the DEV.

The DEV is obviously a newbie. I wish him much success.
I can help with the dialogue. DM Me when you become a member.(y)
 
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The story revolves around the main character who starts working at the company where their father works during their summer vacation.
From the screenshots it looks like he's working at a meat-packing plant.


After their father mysteriously disappears
Well, you don't want to know how the sausage is made...
 
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Maid Dev Games

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Thank you very much for your nice reviews. Please don't be mad at me for the game taking under 30 seconds. I wanted to make an announcement. I am developing alone on a laptop and I want to offer you a pleasant time by producing really nice content. Thank you very much for your comments and experience of the game. I definitely need help with English because my grammar knowledge is very bad. I will fix this. I will get professional help. If we have a willing friend on this subject, we can definitely work together.

Also, I will definitely respond to your requests, albeit slowly. Please send me a private message about what you want to see in the game.I created a list for these requests and I shape the story accordingly.

Best regards to you all
 

punisher2099

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Thank you very much for your nice reviews. Please don't be mad at me for the game taking under 30 seconds. I wanted to make an announcement. I am developing alone on a laptop and I want to offer you a pleasant time by producing really nice content. Thank you very much for your comments and experience of the game. I definitely need help with English because my grammar knowledge is very bad. I will fix this. I will get professional help. If we have a willing friend on this subject, we can definitely work together.

Also, I will definitely respond to your requests, albeit slowly. Please send me a private message about what you want to see in the game.I created a list for these requests and I shape the story accordingly.

Best regards to you all
Oh God please don't do that it'll just end up a nonsensical mess of random scenes that don't follow any sort of logic.
 
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holaje12

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Shota MC I can tolerate, but Futa and other dudes around? Nah, what a waste of some thicc whores
 
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Ahzabake

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Hmm says updates every 2-3 weeks, but it's about 2 months later, and it's still an introduction? :unsure:
 
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