VN Ren'Py Rebel Duet [v0.11] [ionDivvy]

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Geigi

Geigi

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colombianhoes said:
I always wondered how do people write female dialogue lol
Coming as a guy who often has a dude and bro language, i find this impossible xD
But some devs to my surprise somehow nail it and it looks immersive
Maybe AI could help as well
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There's no secret. Writers write men and women how they want them to behave, react, do or say in different situations. Some people can recognise the gender of the writer by the writing, and they always amaze me.
 
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colombianhoes

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I used to joke at one instance where i really was surprised how well the autor wrote female characters and dialogue to the point i thought am i really liking this stuff made by some male dude, am i gay or what lol
 
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Well, to be honest, Valerie is too loving for a dark-themed VN. Maybe some jealousy from her in monogamous route (if MC is paying for a prostitute, or sleeping with other girls) would be a good option. Or her rival could try to seduce MC, and she will be very jealous...
-Ah, Valerie, sorry, but you rival is better kisser
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-I'm really sorry for kissing her... Wait, aren't these our BDSM toys? And where did you get that leather suit and whip?
-Horny human needs more training.
I got carried away again, but I think more conversation and attention from our succubus would made the game better. I like dark themed games, and it would be a good option, where MC slowly turning into the dark warlock, while Valerie is trying to save her human.
 
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colombianhoes

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I did actually like the dark themes this game has, the God of death looks creepy, this vampire or demon guy is also kinda dark or scary. Its slightly goofy too, but hey, its porn game after all. Succubus is also kinda goofy, so i can see your point, not very serious game but it also has some deep moments.

Playing on Val's jealousy, huh? What if tables were turned, rules for thee but not for me lol
 
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Wait, this is actually incredibly written, with many branching choices and great characters with clear personalities. Plus the women look good :D I'm usually to more "thicc" women, but I can definitely look past that here. So rare you find these gems. I do wish it has more animations, but that is the only real complaint I have. I can't wait to see what's next. I kinda feel guilty for playing it for free
 
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sksi26

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Awesome game,the story had me hooked from the start,i bought it on steam right after finishing it.The girls are beautiful(Valerie<3) and interesting with their different backgrounds and personalities.Looking forward to the continuation of the story with more lore about the world and Valerie's past,and the spicier sharing scenes to happen.Great job dev!
 
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is the v0.11 release still on schedule for february 15? just looking forward to some continuation of the story :)
 
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Rehwyn

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Ashira13 said:
is the v0.11 release still on schedule for february 15? just looking forward to some continuation of the story :)
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As of two days ago in Discord, it was still on track for a Saturday afternoon (PST) release, though due to the dev feeling a bit ill the last few days the new training positions might be in a v0.11b patch a few days later.
 
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Battleaxx900

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Ayo, new patch just dropped! I've already gone through the latest chapter a few times to see as much as I can, and I have no complaints that aren't just minor nitpicks - which might explain why nobody else has commented on the patch here yet, lmao.

I'll summarise my thoughts on the new content, as well as the aforementioned minor nitpicks, in some spoiler-tagged bullet points:
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Anyways, thanks once again for the peak content, IonDivvy. I still maintain that this is one of the best visual novels I've seen on this site, I seriously respect how active you are on here in spite of how hostile some folk can be, and I can't wait to see what you've got cooking up for us next. Peace!
 
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Raoddik

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I was sure that I read somewhere that there will be 2 days of town exploring so I was getting ready for the second day and then the game ended... :p
 
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Last update, sex scene with the white haired girl (Rena?) and Fem MC was kinda a let-down. MC pleased her but didn't get nothing in return. Rena was very passive, I bet it was way better for the male MC.

Curious to know how many play the fem MC. I like to play as a female but I think it doesn't really work well here, she's written like a male. I think it's unnecessary additional work to make the fem mc renders. It's too late to change that anyway.
 
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