VN Ren'Py Abandoned REBEL [v0.2] [Makunight]

[gigan]

Makunight how do you plan to handle the incest with patreon?

 

[Night Silis]

Makunight how do you plan to handle the incest with patreon?

In patreon is published the version without incest.

 

[zoislk]

Hello I am the creator of this game, I don't know how it was published here so quickly, I had planned to come and bring it myself, we were fixing the game to improve the English but it seems that we were overtaken, forgive if there are errors, because my intention was to finish improving it first, well send me the feedback or any questions.

Although there were some translation issues it was all understandable which is already big step up from plenty of other games.

Short preview, but enough that I'll check out the next update. I thought the renders and animation were good, hard to have much of an opinion beyond that yet, though.

 

[FormerlyknownasOlheden]

Looks interesting, might give it a try. If future tags include anal and pregnancy I might might even patreon it.

 

[Deleted member 1571716]

"Helloaaaa!" Looks funny. Should've just left "Holaaaaa". Another one that looks funny is "Uncleoooo!" Which also could've been left as "Tiooooo!"

Just my thoughts.

 

[Mistress_Kixen]

Looks interesting I will watch and see what else it holds.

 

[Hakeron]

Wow look so promising ! want an update already !!!

 

[Nightless]

English not really good, a few good GCs but honestly I would not bother to download it right now. Maybe 10 mins playtime and it just feels...

 

[L0thar]

A new version of "Taming the Shrew"?
Let's check what it contains.

 

[Larzeranna]

I'm wondering why this was released. Nothing happens in this at all, the dev should've waited until they had more content. Not a great first impression.

 

[Deleted member 1571716]

There's also a few places where you are using pronouns for male when you should be using pronouns for female. "He" and "Him".

This might help.

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[Hysni]

Nice need more FD game
waiting for best pervy updates good job Dev

 

[M4t7theNinja]

It's a good first update, some of the writing needs to be worked on alot of he's instead of she's and he'll instead of she'll. Theres also one section where Megan is talking on the phonecall but has the protagonist's name instead of hers. I look forward to further releases.

 

[L0thar]

I'm wondering why this was released. Nothing happens in this at all, the dev should've waited until they had more content. Not a great first impression.

It's just an appetizer.
The author is probably curious if we like this dish, so we have to wait a while for the main course.
I am willing to wait.

 

[xmilteach]

Thx

 

[Deleted member 1571716]

It's just an appetizer.
The author is probably curious if we like this dish, so we have to wait a while for the main course.
I am willing to wait.

Also, the dev said the 'dish' was served before it was ready. So, it wasn't even fully 'cooked' yet. Ahahahaha

 

[Fappable One]

This game has my attention. Nice to see games with the Father as the MC. Will keep an eye on it
#FatherLivesMatter

 

[Night Silis]

It's just an appetizer.
The author is probably curious if we like this dish, so we have to wait a while for the main course.
I am willing to wait.

That's right, 0.2 is in development and with much more content.

 

[Alex Lem]

Hello I am the creator of this game, I don't know how it was published here so quickly, I had planned to come and bring it myself, we were fixing the game to improve the English but it seems that we were overtaken, forgive if there are errors, because my intention was to finish improving it first, well send me the feedback or any questions.

Hello Makunight. So there will be two paths in the game? On one path you are more strict, and that path will be more about romance and changing your daughter more in the direction of a good girl, and on the other you let her do whatever she wants, and that leads more to corruption and in the direction of a bad girl, something like that, am I right? Or something more complex?

 

[L0thar]

Also, the dev said the 'dish' was served before it was ready. So, it wasn't even fully 'cooked' yet. Ahahahaha

An appetizer is not a dish.
A little patience didn't hurt anyone.