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Thanks the next update will be soon and better optimized.Enjoyed it, Keep up the great work will be watching!
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- Dec 3, 2019
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Aside from the obvious grammar issues this game has potential.
- Jul 18, 2017
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Thx for the English translation I added some bug fixes as well (e.g. the line of dialogue u couldn't get to work. I added it and some other code issues)
The file below is English translation + bug fixes
drop it in game > tl > english. You may have to rename the downloaded file to script.rpy
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- Oct 24, 2019
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That´s because he has used some translator I guess... in Spanish "papá = Dad" but "papa = Pope" so...
"papa" also means "potato" in Latin America and is commonly used with the same meaning in some regions in Spain, it would be funny to read "potato" instead "dad" xD
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I haven't looked at the fixed script for the Engrish, but the renders were quite good and the story arc seemed to travel along naturally. I look forward to what this can evolve into in the future.
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It will improve the translation, that's the priority, the arc is the idea, make it different from other games that already have relationships at the beginning, my idea is to bring it as real as possible, thanks for your comment.
- Jan 22, 2019
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Very nice renders! The girls are gorgeous. The English was a bit distracting at first. But I find it easy enough to push the actual text in the background and simply 'imagine' proper dialogues in my head. It's easy enough to follow the plot - and I like where this is going!
Good luck with the project!
Good luck with the project!
- Aug 12, 2020
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Thanks for your comment, as I told a lot of people, I recognize my mistakes in the translation, and will be the first to fix them in the next update. My priority is to have a good translation.
- Sep 26, 2019
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so this is not criticism but is the way to succeed in this vn to let her have her way? Or will it have routes for a strict taming and pal dad?
- Oct 24, 2019
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so far she does tame her daddy ... " i'll be a good guy baby "
- Sep 26, 2019
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Lol yup that's the vibe I'm getting too. May have to put the paddles back in the drawso far she does tame her daddy ... " i'll be a good guy baby "
- Oct 24, 2019
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hey if my daughter in game will be a good girl .. i can be a very good daddy
- Jul 18, 2017
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yah a lot of ppl dont read the posts that are already there
just a side note:
lines 1687-1691 should be moved to 69-73
because 69-73 don't work and 1687-1691 is were the dialogue comes from
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