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You got facepalmed because your comment essentially was asking MC to be a super hero in his very first actual fight, while he is at most a couple of weeks old. Powerful or not, he is young, very very young.My expectations about that fight were a bit different so I (cheeky bastard how dare he!) dared to voice my discontent and got facepalmed for it
More important, if he becomes too OP it kills the story. At some point, you can always wonder "why doesn't MC just force his way through all the problems given how OP he is". For the story to remain interesting, it is better he develops slowly. And he is already developing quite fast.
I can agree with your arguments concerning MCs inexperience and powers but... the thing that made me disappointed is that not long ago we were shown the true power of the claws (Archon vamp thug getting clawed) - claws are pretty powerful, they cause excruciating and almost paralyzing pain.
In the fight, our MC did not even put a single scratch on feral nos, correction - he did claw her once but without any significant effect after Laurie shot her in the face.
Agreed, unfair fight, but we somehow diverged from the main point of my contested post about the fight sequence not meeting the basic requirements to call it exciting.
Facts:
1. They know NOS can become invisible but MC can become invisible too - an obvious tactical advantage that was not used in the fight
2. Sharon tactician? There was not a shred of tactics in their "squad" approach to the enemy.
3. Andrew being exposed to the backside attack, he should have pinned his back to the wall at least when she went invisible and MC should have tried using the "invisibility act" to his advantage too.
Now imagine a possibly more satisfying fight sequence - MC goes ninja invisible, gets behind feral NOS, and claws her till the cows come home.
When she turns to him he "ninja" disappears again and does the same again and again. Tactics and mindfuckery!
I tried replaying that bit without Laurie and it came as more satisfying for a very silly reason - MCs (Ripley) Alien movie reference sentence after the fight.
On all the comments about using more powers it needs to be understood that powers may not be available. If with only the claws variation the fight was this short imagine if he also included a variation on invisibility. There are only so many alternatives that dev can do without a simple fight requiring 3 months developings.My thoughts on the fight sequence:
The MC should have used more of his powers whether to go invisible or to use his claws to attempt to win the fight I agree BUT in the end he still should be fucked up because we all know that vampires grow stronger the older they are and the MC is still a child in vampire years compared to NOS who is older than a granny and NOT only that but the MC does not have any training in fighting or using his vampire abilities.
The MC is already powerful for a youngling and is going to become really really powerful with time so I see no problem with him losing here plus it's way more fun to see him become badass overtime.
Besides, he did use his claws if you have them and they save the day, without claws, I think she escapes instead of getting turned to ashes, although the idea is that the sun might finish the job.
And I am confident secret whispers would be useless.
Overall, I think he did quite well in the fight for being his first one. He is young, naive and sometimes borderline childish. But he saved Andrew's ass and kept the bitch entertained so they could kill her. Overall, it was good!
She says your mouth smells rotten and you don't share blood to each other. Worst case, is how she says you smell rotten. Made me wonder if she spoke of food or my soul, specially as the variable is "soulstainmiri"What happened? I only ate the omelete and said goodbye.
Please, let her go all wild with me! No strings attached!!if Sharon is a normal vampire, Astrid is the feral kind.
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