Nice update!
MC: "We heard." you cut her off.
" --> delete second "
MC: "Andrew would have mention(ed) it."
Sharon: "Why are you so
insistant?" -->(insistent?)
Sharon: "You have the power inside you(r) veins, you know."
Andrew: "His mistress did that (t)o him."
MC: "We all have
you blindspots, like Andrew says."
The "Woman"(Adelina) that greets Sharon has the police officer icon in her text box
Sharon: "They work with (the) quaestor"
Perhaps seeing a( n ) unpleasant look in your eyes,...
Adelina: "O(u)r guest of honor has arrived."
Roland: "For the faithless,
of(on) the other hand..."
Roland: "I know we all have bus
t( y ) schedules our little community, so I'll make this brief."
Roland: "How they endangered our kind by bringing on us the attention of those who whom we wish to be shielded from."
Sharon: "Can you make sure the good sergeant get('s) back home ok?"
When saving at the end i got this error both times i tried