I'm big LwM fan - as those who know me already know. By saying that, I'm slightly sceptical.
Font... Yeah, It's fancy but I read "You fucked out to find her place..." and I wondered what the Hell that means... Of course, in fact, it is "You lucked out to find her place...". It's readable but I think we don't need hieroglyphs to know how old everyone is.
John with blond hair?! That was fucking creepy! And then Andi turned you into a vampire.
I don't see possible love interests - aside from MC's friend and I don't find her particularly pretty. Other girls and other GUYS... And that last scene? I bet N-crowd will come running and pleading - because, let's be honest, there is an unsettling feeling of that dreaded N-word. And I really hope we won't have, with all the above mentioned, another mum-son game.
Right now, I'm not positive about this game, but I'll give it few updates before a final verdict.