2 points about the game ended. first and foremost, i see absolutely no reason why kelly is still with chris at the end of the game. she should have divorced him and went to live with jade and MC. chris came across as distant, disrespectful of kellys culture with the kimono, and honestly the story didnt alude to any love between them.
game also ended rather abrubtly imo. the other superwriter games had endings for the characters that hinted more to what the future would hold for them.
and a side note, the story in this game is the script that sasha and MC in picture perfect plays out that they got from sarah green. and i got the impression that script was her own story, in other words kelly should be sarah green. i also was under the impression that she was married to her father. this game also seem to take place a while after picture perfect, so sasha being given a script that is based to "real events" that havent happened yet is kinda confusing.