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no_name_742

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i really like the use time skips, it allows the story to developed more naturally without actually having to show to slow progression from meeting to love. most of the time after only a few interactions the character are in love with each other, its only been a week in game time, it doesnt normally happen that fast.

only criticism i have is the sex scenes are a little bland and minimal, but its more narrative project then porn so its fine.
 

AlexTorch

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While i like the models, the story for me is one of the worst of the developer, for one i really don't like cheating (i always think that one of the lovers will get a salty pussy and for me is disgusting), also there is a lot of jump cuts on the story itself, a lot of those could be filled with development of their relation, and the last but this one is more personal, i never know someone that was put in adoption seeing their parent 20 years later, accepting so easy all that, i'm not saying that they could not have a relationship, but for me it was rushed a lot, there will be always some hard feelings of why they have done that.
 
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While i like the models, the story for me is one of the worst of the developer, for one i really don't like cheating (i always think that one of the lovers will get a salty pussy and for me is disgusting), also there is a lot of jump cuts on the story itself, a lot of those could be filled with development of their relation, and the last but this one is more personal, i never know someone that was put in adoption seeing their parent 20 years later, accepting so easy all that, i'm not saying that they could not have a relationship, but for me it was rushed a lot, there will be always some hard feelings of why they have done that.
Not sure what you mean about a salty pussy lol. But I understand not everyone likes cheating, totally understandable. As for the jump cuts, this is a short VN, so they are necessary to keep the pace a bit quicker. And for Kelly's attitude, she is grateful that they gave her up for adoption to have a better life.

Would most people still harbor negative feelings anyway? Sure. But not 100%
 

AlexTorch

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Not sure what you mean about a salty pussy lol. But I understand not everyone likes cheating, totally understandable. As for the jump cuts, this is a short VN, so they are necessary to keep the pace a bit quicker. And for Kelly's attitude, she is grateful that they gave her up for adoption to have a better life.

Would most people still harbor negative feelings anyway? Sure. But not 100%
For salty pussy the best way to you understand is showing this . The cheating thing is how you can LOVE (not just want to fuck) someone and sleep with another, even worse if you fantasianting about that person while fucking your husband, for me her cheating is the complete opposite of her personality, she don't look like a ho. The jump cuts i can understand, but that is a lost opportunity to put stuff there and develop more about their relationship, even if you have plans to make a short vn put small flashbacks and not the spongebob "2 years later". And lastly about kelly attitude, i understand that everyone is different and for her at that moment was a shock and she was happy, but from my own experience, yeah, they would talk, even drink a beer together, but that person will never be the "parent", parent is the one who raise and not what to put in the world.
 
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Hi,

Visually and models are great looking.

I have to say I am not a cheating guy.. hence I feel kinda bad playing or being the MC.
Especially because the wife seems like such a sweetheart...

I hope there is the end I hope for....

Regards
 
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Hi,

Visually and models are great looking.

I have to say I am not a cheating guy.. hence I feel kinda bad playing or being the MC.
Especially because the wife seems like such a sweetheart...

I hope there is the end I hope for....

Regards
This is a cheating story, so if that's not your preference, you're probably not going to like the remaining few updates. Sorry about that.
 
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Future plans
Hey, guys. I just wanted to update you on what I've been thinking. Sun Breed and Follow the Leader are of course still on track. Working on FtL.10 now and that'll be out within the next two weeks. And then Sun Breed 0.8

I just updated Reconnecting to 0.4, and it'll get a few more updates I'm thinking. Maybe two or three. And then that'll end the anthology right there, for now, anyway.

I want to get to the two big games I have where the stories will be much deeper and there will be a ton of love options. And animations, etc, but Have to finish everything I'm working on now. So that's the plan for now.

Still thinking about this but this is what I'm leaning towards so please let me know what you think if you have any questions.


SuperWriter great to know u will be working on bigger games.
But honestly I was looking for Kingdom Raiders the most.
Hope u will finish that before u go into big games.
As I can u also removed remaining anthologies from patreon tiers..are u not going to work on that??
I'll be working on the short visual novels one at a time instead of all 3 at the same time. Less of a burden that way and I can start them whenever I feel up to it. Don't know when I'll get to the other short visual novels, but I'm going to be focused on the two big games in the future for now.
 

Bahamut Zero

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Hi guys just a little confuse. I just find this game right now. And i see incest tag.
From the images i see is dad/daughter incest?
Can someone explain to me a bit about the story?
There is relationship change? How the incest work?
Just to understand.

Thank you
 

Bahamut Zero

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Hi first of all i finally try you game. And what to say?
The plot look really good. Also the women look gorgeous.
If i can i wanna give you an advice. Because I think you've blown a few opportunities.
After the first time the MC and his daughter make love and the mc impregnate her. Instead of show black screen and saying that they've been doing it more and more since then, you could have shown various situations in which they had sex with protection.

Also when she discovery her pregnant state, you can use the various months to show us the sex scenes with the pregnant girl. So to let us see how the tummy grows from one sex session to the next sex, till her belly grow to the max.

So as to make us understand how their relationship has become increasingly important and intimate. Also because in this way high peaks of excitement are reached, having a pregnant woman on the screen.

Instead at this moment the game shows only two moments of maximum intimacy (sex scene)(the one where she become pregnant and the one at the bathhouse. Yes we see also the massage. But nothing more. So the game telling too much in terms of plot (is good) but showing less than what the player would like to see (more sex scene) But only because you let the two start the sex thing during the initial stages.

Anyway thank you cant wait to see more.
 
Jul 2, 2022
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Hi first of all i finally try you game. And what to say?
The plot look really good. Also the women look gorgeous.
If i can i wanna give you an advice. Because I think you've blown a few opportunities.
After the first time the MC and his daughter make love and the mc impregnate her. Instead of show black screen and saying that they've been doing it more and more since then, you could have shown various situations in which they had sex with protection.

Also when she discovery her pregnant state, you can use the various months to show us the sex scenes with the pregnant girl. So to let us see how the tummy grows from one sex session to the next sex, till her belly grow to the max.

So as to make us understand how their relationship has become increasingly important and intimate. Also because in this way high peaks of excitement are reached, having a pregnant woman on the screen.

Instead at this moment the game shows only two moments of maximum intimacy (sex scene)(the one where she become pregnant and the one at the bathhouse. Yes we see also the massage. But nothing more. So the game telling too much in terms of plot (is good) but showing less than what the player would like to see (more sex scene) But only because you let the two start the sex thing during the initial stages.

Anyway thank you cant wait to see more.
I'll consider what you're saying. I usually tend to skip those shots, but I get how you're saying you want to see those scenes as a player. Thank you for commenting and I'm glad you're enjoying the game. More soon
 
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