TinWoodman555

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Well, this game seems interesting... but the engine makes it unplayable at the moment. I do see text, but either I click and some unexpected thing happens, or there is a massive scroll of text, or I simply have no clue what to do (seriously, 5 books just to cheer her up?)

Please post again when the alpha stage is passed. (so give your release a proper name and include alpha)
I'll let you know :D
 

Damonalgren

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I am not usually reviewing , But damn this is really a good game . My hats off for you Mr.TinWoodman . I hope you continue this game and don't leave it after one or two updates.
 
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Latex224

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This looks like an promising game :love:

I will though wait a couple of updates (always do) before i try this out but it is on my "high-priority" list to try it. (y)
Saw on the big/overview picture in OP that the girl had a leash attached to the collar (love it:eek::love:) and that had me thinking, will the game have some kind of bdsm? (i am thinking most for the Bondage and Submission part)?
Please correct me if am wrong but i asked that question because i wasn't sure if F95 had a "submission" tag. ;)

Best of luck with your game Mr TinWoodman555
 
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TinWoodman555

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This looks like an promising game :love:

I will though wait a couple of updates (always do) before i try this out but it is on my "high-priority" list to try it. (y)
Saw on the big/overview picture in OP that the girl had a leash attached to the collar (love it:eek::love:) and that had me thinking, will the game have some kind of bdsm? (i am thinking most for the Bondage and Submission part)?
Please correct me if am wrong but i asked that question because i wasn't sure if F95 had a "submission" tag. ;)

Best of luck with your game Mr TinWoodman555
Thanks! Yes, it's all about BDSM
 
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Rico Caramba

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Slut trainer has always been one of my guilty pleasures. Not because of the brilliant story (which it hasn't) but because of the excellent artwork. So I liked playing it, even if it was sometimes more of a pain in the butt to me than it was to Dorothy.

I will be following Red Sakura as well. TinWoodman555, don't let the trolls get to you. People have absolutely no idea how much work, love and care any dev invests in his work. While a negative post only takes a few minutes to write and usually less than a few seconds for thought.

Please, keep up the good work.
 

drhotrod

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A slave must recover fully before starting something. Some tasks take a little power, and some (for example, flogging) a lot.
One division on the scale is 10%. That is, when I say that submissiveness has increased by 10, it means - 10%
The mechanic you use is too slow to build up points. Doing a meeting to give pictures increases sub by 1, while spanking does the same. Spanking should do at least 2 points per hit.

Other areas of improvement: add a speed-up button for the driving or just make auto after the first use. Having to click 12 times gets really old.

Buying the bedroom should give more recovery than 2 points, when you are trying to max sub points, you just grind too many days.
 

TinWoodman555

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The mechanic you use is too slow to build up points. Doing a meeting to give pictures increases sub by 1, while spanking does the same. Spanking should do at least 2 points per hit.

Other areas of improvement: add a speed-up button for the driving or just make auto after the first use. Having to click 12 times gets really old.

Buying the bedroom should give more recovery than 2 points, when you are trying to max sub points, you just grind too many days.
Noted, thanks for feedback
 

Morkar

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little analysis and advice

the art is very good and the scenes very well you make the story and the game promises but it has a lot to improve

1 of what use is having a status bar if with just losing a point of any of the attributes it is impossible to do anything?
It doesn't make sense that you can't send her to work, for example, because she is only 90% in the mood or she lacks a point of energy, that needs to be improved A LOT because letting her rest would have to make her gain more energy and recover some mood.

2 grind tremendously excessive in the long run it becomes very heavy that you lose money every day what is the use of earning 80 as a driver if you lose 55 a day? that means you don't really win 80 if not only 25
and with the escorts the same every time you send your minimum slave to work you have to buy 2 chocolates losing 50 (that if you have not done any previous scene where everything goes down even more) because their work does not make you earn 450 if not only 400 because whenever you have to do any action you lose money that's a shit

3 is there no real sense of progress that it is useful to train her and to level her up and be more willing to do other things if she keeps earning the same money for work?
once you have made several of the scenes taking into account that you learn to let yourself be touched and wear lingerie and sesy etc for the work, it should be reflected in the amount of money you earn for it and you do not

4 the option to drive becomes very heavy that every day you have to see the same text saying the same thing that makes it tedious that text should only come out the first time and the subsequent ones just click and earn the money or even automate everything in work plan-daily expenses = as much earned per day

5 fruits of the training this I suppose will not be implemented as it is version 0.1 but I want to understand that later you can visit your slaves in their rooms and order things that will increase as their level progresses (strip blowjobs sex etc) and also taking into account that they are rewards it would be an option to make them happy without having to spend all day throwing money in the trash as gifts even if they lost energy by the action theirs would be to win mood

I also understand that later on you can play with several of your slaves at the same time or even see how they play with each other


It is fine for 0.1 but in 0.2 the grinding needs to be improved by reducing it as much as possible if the game does not become heavy and boring if it becomes that, people will not want to play it and you will not earn money on patreon so that you must solve it

ay the punishments are that PUNISHES you should be able to do them when you want it does not make sense that the slave does not have humor or enough energy to be punished and the works as well as it is obligatory to have that this 100% of the whole is not logical perhaps you are always going to work 100% happy and full of energy every day?

You should also put an option to automate the escorts of your slaves to speed up the game.

otherwise waiting for 0.2 to see how the game improves and see how the next slave is
and now a question

are you going to add incest to the game?
For example, do any of your slaves have a sister or do you enslave a single mother and her daughter or something like that?

another detail that I just remembered
the text box is too big and it covers the screen too much

Either you make the image window smaller or you reduce the text box or you make it more transparent so you don't miss a big piece of the CG (constantly opening and closing it to see the image well is not a good idea)
 
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TinWoodman555

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Nov 17, 2019
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little analysis and advice

the art is very good and the scenes very well you make the story and the game promises but it has a lot to improve

1 of what use is having a status bar if with just losing a point of any of the attributes it is impossible to do anything?
It doesn't make sense that you can't send her to work, for example, because she is only 90% in the mood or she lacks a point of energy, that needs to be improved A LOT because letting her rest would have to make her gain more energy and recover some mood.

2 grind tremendously excessive in the long run it becomes very heavy that you lose money every day what is the use of earning 80 as a driver if you lose 55 a day? that means you don't really win 80 if not only 25
and with the escorts the same every time you send your minimum slave to work you have to buy 2 chocolates losing 50 (that if you have not done any previous scene where everything goes down even more) because their work does not make you earn 450 if not only 400 because whenever you have to do any action you lose money that's a shit

3 is there no real sense of progress that it is useful to train her and to level her up and be more willing to do other things if she keeps earning the same money for work?
once you have made several of the scenes taking into account that you learn to let yourself be touched and wear lingerie and sesy etc for the work, it should be reflected in the amount of money you earn for it and you do not

4 the option to drive becomes very heavy that every day you have to see the same text saying the same thing that makes it tedious that text should only come out the first time and the subsequent ones just click and earn the money or even automate everything in work plan-daily expenses = as much earned per day

5 fruits of the training this I suppose will not be implemented as it is version 0.1 but I want to understand that later you can visit your slaves in their rooms and order things that will increase as their level progresses (strip blowjobs sex etc) and also taking into account that they are rewards it would be an option to make them happy without having to spend all day throwing money in the trash as gifts even if they lost energy by the action theirs would be to win mood

I also understand that later on you can play with several of your slaves at the same time or even see how they play with each other


It is fine for 0.1 but in 0.2 the grinding needs to be improved by reducing it as much as possible if the game does not become heavy and boring if it becomes that, people will not want to play it and you will not earn money on patreon so that you must solve it

ay the punishments are that PUNISHES you should be able to do them when you want it does not make sense that the slave does not have humor or enough energy to be punished and the works as well as it is obligatory to have that this 100% of the whole is not logical perhaps you are always going to work 100% happy and full of energy every day?

You should also put an option to automate the escorts of your slaves to speed up the game.

otherwise waiting for 0.2 to see how the game improves and see how the next slave is
and now a question

are you going to add incest to the game?
For example, do any of your slaves have a sister or do you enslave a single mother and her daughter or something like that?
1, 2 - ok, i will think about it, thanks
3- This is only the first release, many new ways to make money will be available soon. This will be the main mechanics of the game - more training, more money, more opportunities
4- The work as a driver just ONLY for the case when you have no money left, not enough even to pay for the mansion. In this case, you will not be able to progress, game over, so I made this low pay job and yes, I specially made it uncomfortable for you I must make money with your slaves but not yourself. You are the Master of Slaves, Gentleman, Big guy :). In a future release, I will remove this button and player will not have the opportunity to work as a driver again and again, only if you bankrupt
5 - yes you can visit your slaves for anything you want, oral, anal, you can force them do a lot of humiliating things
6 - Yes, slaves will be play with each other
7 - grinding, this can be a problem, now the game contains more than 300 rendered images, in next release it will be 600-700.
8 - punishments and automate the escorts - i'll think about
9 - no incest planned. But i think about if it interesting
 
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