Polyrotix

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Game Developer
May 20, 2018
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It doesn't, it's the same as left click.
Damn! I must've fucked up the config.key on the game! I'm sorry for that.

I agree the beginning MMO setup is quite long. My suggestion is a skip button at the start, that brings you to the hospital scene. Also an option to skip besides hold control is always nice I feel.

Your game is very high quality, so I would like to see your patreon do well. But I feel like there's no reason to be a patron at the moment. When a new game comes out that is the optimal time to get a large spike of initial patrons, which would increase your success on patreon. I feel like you need some posts on there to give people a reason to pledge. You have the usual alpha access, but i definitely suggest getting some posts up soon. I suggest special game character renders (that wont be in the game), even getting a poll on there now would be good. Giving stuff to patrons outside of the actual game seems like a good way to go.

Anyway like I said, you should be proud of the quality of your game. I wish you the best.
Thank you for the feedback! I'll work on the Patreon feed.
 

Maestro91

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Aug 2, 2017
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Loved the freckled redheads, my absolute favorite haircolor. That being said, I wouldn't mind that Indian milf either.:winkytongue:

Big minus is the looooong intro, seriously needs a skip button or an optional skip intro entierly, either way more devs should have skip button in their games.

Again, LOVED the mother/daughter redheads.:heartcoveredeyes: Looking forward to pale footjobs.:winkytongue:

Edit: Totally forgot about mentioning the story,:coldsweat: very interesting premise. It's similar enough to others that I've seen before and still different enough to hold it's own as something new. Writing too was on par. Good job
 

Mark17

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May 15, 2017
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Hey I love this game not only because Freckled redheads and Fiona looks like Scarlett Johansson but because mother and daughter it's seems looks like a lot each other in appearance it's incredible difficult too meet a game in this site where mother and daughter looks you know mother and biological daughter and not adopted one!
 

Deleted member 54063

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Damn! I must've fucked up the config.key on the game! I'm sorry for that.
I just don't understand why you're doing it this way, and that's my main problem here. It's almost like you're trying to reinvent as many wheels as you can. While experimentation and innovation is always good, they have to be robustly designed before being unleashed on the public. You can't shove so much down people's throats at the same time and expect them to swallow.

There's a reason all of the good games follow a formula, it works and users can experience the story without fuss.
 

markus T

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Jun 11, 2017
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Thanks for the feedback! You can skip the dialogue by holding the "Space Bar". This is the very first episode and I appreciate the feedback even if its harsh as it'll still help me improve the game in the future.

I encourage others to do the same. I'll be monitoring this thread for awhile!
I'll be watching this one...I mean...red heads:heartcoveredeyes::heartcoveredeyes::heartcoveredeyes:...whats not to like about that:eek:penedeyewink:
 

Dustellar

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Aug 22, 2016
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This game have a very interesting story, really original compared to other porn games and of course it need an "skip intro" option but considering that it don't have my favorite fetish I guess I will not play it anymore, don't get me wrong the game is great and I love redheads but if I want a good plot I prefer to play a normal game, if a porn game don't have some of my fetishes it doesn't excite me, if only Fiona and Priscilla were MC family but I guess Patreon rules affected that (or not) so... in that case I prefer a generic porn game over the best porn game plot xD

Anyway, again good luck with this proyect... it's clear that you invested a lot of time, dedication and money in this so you deserves the support of the people :)
 

r2623699

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Nov 8, 2017
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@Polyrotix

~~ Kind words:
This is the highest quality production VN I've ever seen produced to date, IMHO. I might even go as far as saying it's above Dreams of Desire (which is my #1 VN).

As a designer-hobbyist myself I can't but just envy your work. The models, lightning and arrangements are superb. It's so photorealistic I thought you included real pictures into the game just by looking at the screenshots.

~~ Harsh words:
The intro is, at this point, incredibly long. As many people have said already: it gets really boring after the first 2 minutes. I'm not saying your work on it is wasted, but you should follow the pattern: 10-20% intro + 70-80% main story + 10% "conclusion" (while in development, this last bit should be something 'catchy' to make people impatient for your next release). You should have kept the intro shorter and saved the renders for the next releases where you could add more to the intro as you added more to the main story.

I'll just reiterate over some other issues others have pointed out, that really negatively affect my personal gameplay:
* Rollback disabled by default
* preferences.skip_unseen hidden from the preferences menu (I enjoy VNs by looking, not reading)
* Right click should go to Saves
* The main menu is overcoloured. A personal suggestion would be to desaturate the postcard background and make the button's onhover effect permanent (so there'd be no need to hover to know what each button does, and the buttons backgrounds would still add that extra detail).

Please keep up the awesome work.
 

Nightless

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Jan 13, 2018
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*thumps up* for the readheads, and for the game itseld, really not much to see, have to wait a bit :D
 
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