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I am glad I did not because the story is very interesting but I think the dev should rework the intro - it seemed unnecessary and may potentially drive away new players. It did not look like it added anything to the story (I mean who cares about skill names, strategies against monsters etc) so I think it should have been much shorter.
Exactly. I've played a few MMOs for years and I even found it boring. If I wanted MMO, I'd go play one. But we're here for porn games.
 
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I'll go with the general opinion here, what a mess of a game, catastrophic deciscion all along the line. I mean I've played the game for 5 mn now and it's really super boring and I didnt even saw anything that looks like a woman yet.

Every character is rendered but not the first woman you talk too (the mother). Seriously unimpressed so far and not really wanting to go further especially as the dev thought it would be interesting to cut out the skip or auto function.

Ok tried to go further, it goes even more with male talking to male, what a boring setup. Nothing to even excite us a bit. Sorry but not gonna push forward anymore.
 
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Here's my save - just after the lightning strike which streams his consciousness into the body of a much younger man. There is still a lot of hospital and doctor stuff, but I think you need that for the story.

Extract the contents into ...game/saves/ First time ever uploading a save, so apologies if I got it wrong.
 
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Well, the problem when you post a VN in a non-VN website is that you get the wrong target audience. Some of us get you though!

You people have NO IDEA what you're missing out on. That is one of the most stylish EVNs I've seen in... well half a year because there was "The Letter", which is THE best EVN to date. But I'm getting off topic. The point is, dev, I love your work A LOT. The setting is amazing, the plot's intriguing, the details are cool, the characters are FUCKING AWESOME, and it'll be a damn, DAMN SHAME if you cater to these fools who scorn your work because they came only for porn and missed a potential Mona Lisa as a result. Your VN has my blood pumped and I'm eager to see more. Keep up what you're doing. I'm perfectly fine reading through hours of story before getting to anything erotic, WHICH IS HOW PLOT HEAVY VNS WORK BY THE WAY, SO GET OUT OF HERE AND TAKE YOUR NEGATIVITY WITH YOU, YOU FOOLS.
 

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Should be against the rules to post a 0.1 version without giving an estimate length to how long it is.

Not wasting time downloading another 2 minute long 0.1 shitshow.
 

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Well, the problem when you post a VN in a non-VN website is that you get the wrong target audience. Some of us get you though!

You people have NO IDEA what you're missing out on. That is one of the most stylish EVNs I've seen in... well half a year because there was "The Letter", which is THE best EVN to date. But I'm getting off topic. The point is, dev, I love your work A LOT. The setting is amazing, the plot's intriguing, the details are cool, the characters are FUCKING AWESOME, and it'll be a damn, DAMN SHAME if you cater to these fools who scorn your work because they came only for porn and missed a potential Mona Lisa as a result. Your VN has my blood pumped and I'm eager to see more. Keep up what you're doing. I'm perfectly fine reading through hours of story before getting to anything erotic, WHICH IS HOW PLOT HEAVY VNS WORK BY THE WAY, SO GET OUT OF HERE AND TAKE YOUR NEGATIVITY WITH YOU, YOU FOOLS.
let say things clear. everybody have their own taste. as same as everybody have the right to critics the way they want as long its in respectful manner.

saying the game is shit is exactly the same as saying this game is the best of the best.

everybody their own opinion. and you cant just say them to get out of here with their negativity. they share their opinions. as same as you share your. respect each other and move on.
 

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Well, the problem when you post a VN in a non-VN website is that you get the wrong target audience. Some of us get you though!

You people have NO IDEA what you're missing out on. That is one of the most stylish EVNs I've seen in... well half a year because there was "The Letter", which is THE best EVN to date. But I'm getting off topic. The point is, dev, I love your work A LOT. The setting is amazing, the plot's intriguing, the details are cool, the characters are FUCKING AWESOME, and it'll be a damn, DAMN SHAME if you cater to these fools who scorn your work because they came only for porn and missed a potential Mona Lisa as a result. Your VN has my blood pumped and I'm eager to see more. Keep up what you're doing. I'm perfectly fine reading through hours of story before getting to anything erotic, WHICH IS HOW PLOT HEAVY VNS WORK BY THE WAY, SO GET OUT OF HERE AND TAKE YOUR NEGATIVITY WITH YOU, YOU FOOLS.
I'm not here just for porn. I like to have a decent story and plot, with the porn a nice reward when you get there. The introduction IS long and badly written. Our opinions counts as much as yours and hopefully the dev will take the time to read the comments and edit his work appropriately. I don't care for your tone and calling people fools like that is just begging for that report button...
 

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let say things clear. everybody have their own taste. as same as everybody have the right to critics the way they want as long its in respectful manner.

saying the game is shit is exactly the same as saying this game is the best of the best.

everybody their own opinion. and you cant just say them to get out of here with their negativity. they share their opinions. as same as you share your. respect each other and move on.
Respect? I thought not putting any swear words is respect enough to strangers I strongly disagree against! But of course, there's always a high elf who tells you 'you've no right to criticize anyone because I say so'...

I'm not here just for porn. I like to have a decent story and plot, with the porn a nice reward when you get there. The introduction IS long and badly written. Our opinions counts as much as yours and hopefully the dev will take the time to read the comments and edit his work appropriately. I don't care for your tone and calling people fools like that is just begging for that report button...
"Not wasting time downloading another 2 minute long 0.1 shitshow."
"And the bastard even took out the "skip all" option."
"Holy shit this first scene is trying really hard to drive people away, isn't it. Why do I have to click through this nonsense? edit: Wow it just kept going. Deleted."

When people actually start respecting the devs who make games, especially ones that actually show great potential and not-just-a-scam, I'll start respecting them. But otherwise? No. Especially not in a website like this.
 

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Respect? I thought not putting any swear words is respect enough to strangers I strongly disagree against! But of course, there's always a high elf who tells you 'you've no right to criticize anyone because I say so'...

"Not wasting time downloading another 2 minute long 0.1 shitshow."
"And the bastard even took out the "skip all" option."
"Holy shit this first scene is trying really hard to drive people away, isn't it. Why do I have to click through this nonsense? edit: Wow it just kept going. Deleted."

When people actually start respecting the devs who make games, especially ones that actually show great potential and not-just-a-scam, I'll start respecting them. But otherwise? No. Especially not in a website like this.
You took three posts that you didn't like, and bundled everyone else in with them. You're allowed to insult people, but people aren't allowed to criticize you or the game? Ok.

If everyone goes around saying "I won't show respect, unless...", then respect will never be earned by anyone. Just because you disagree, doesn't mean you're right to start insulting everyone.

The first on this site.
Be respectful. Opinions are fine, attacks are not.
People who play these games - on this site and others - are tired of 0.1 games that under deliver, turn out to be cock teasing scams, or just burn out. This isn't a generic VN site, it's primarily (if not entirely) porn. There are some here, like myself, that love a good story. But this wasn't the case here - that's our judgement, and we're entitled to it. We spent the majority of the first installment experiencing an origin story that was unnecessarily drawn out, something almost every other game out there with one, explains briefly in about a minute or so (but they still allow you to skip it :eek:), and then just gets to the actual story.

What made it frustrating for everyone, is that the dev messed with perfectly good mechanisms in a perfectly good engine, blocking the ability for those who wanted to skip that content from doing so. Development time was spent, forcing every user to endure it. The dev prioritizes that over letting the user experience the game how they normally do, and we're supposed to show respect for that? The game post origin story seemed fine, and something I'd like to play, but my personal experience was soured. Creating a game isn't just a good base story and nice graphics. Engine utilization, UI, design and user experience are high priorities too, and can ruin what could otherwise be a good game.

If you think we should all just blow smoke up a dev's ass, and you're unwilling to accept that people will critique work, that's on you - if you find a beautiful planet where critique isn't needed, send us a postcard. People here always critique work. While I personally think it should try to be constructive, and that name calling shouldn't take place, it does sadly happen. But that shouldn't take away from the positives that do take place. While this might be a pirate site, I personally use it to weed out the games that are lemons, and support the ones I like - as do others.
 

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Renders are very very well done. Introduction with this game takes way too long. I'm not interested in some future online game. A shorter introduction to how you end up like this would've been better.

It would be much more plausible if the MC would just lose his memories and he wakes up being acting different (kinder). This would've shorten the introduction to a few minutes and you could've done much more storytelling with the other characters.
Now that you have the useless long introduction done anyway, don't bother to remove it again. Just a Option to skip this would be nice because it takes ~30min to get through and has no correlation with the game it promises to be.
 
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macadam

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But of course, there's always a high elf who tells you 'you've no right to criticize anyone because I say so'...
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i dont get that part.. but the main point is not about " i tell that so you do it". the main point is " peoples have right to give their opinion, you have right to not have the same opinion. but respect each others opinion."

critic is the best rewards for an artist.

if you say to this artist his art is absolutly perfect, then he just gonna do what he do all day and dont care anymore.

if you say to that artist his art is shit, then 2 possibles way are coming up :
1- he gonna abandon and thats a proof that he didnt put his hope and love in what he do.
2- he gonna work more to improve what he do. and thats exactly what peoples want.

even if a game is absolutly perfect. do NEVER say to the artist that its perfect, or he will sleep.
say him all the games/arts bad points, and so he will put effort on it and improve it. this, is what peoples want and in same time, give the artist a good excuse to practice and getting even better at that.


thats my opinion, feel free to not have the same.
 

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Fuck me. Screw the whole "traditional anime" waifu concept, 3d models are getting way hotter. With dreams of desire's models now this. I can only wait and drool at the future. Not to mention these come in my favorite flavor. Redhead with freckles.
Hh ginger women are top tier hot and ginger men are abominations that should die by fire, life sure is strange.
 

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if you say to that artist his art is shit, then 2 possibles way are coming up :
1- he gonna abandon and thats a proof that he didnt put his hope and love in what he do.
2- he gonna work more to improve what he do. and thats exactly what peoples want.
I think I understand what you are getting at, but your two choices for the artist to pick after being criticized makes me cringe. The 3rd option and the one a true artist would hopefully pick, in my opinion, is damn it to all! To me, an artist creates the art for the sake of the art, and critics be damned! If the band Rush listened to their record company, there would have been no 2112, and therefore there would have been no Rush as we know it.

Now with that said, not everyone who thinks of themselves as an artist is an artist. And yes, constructive criticism should be listened to and evaluated, even if it isn't used.

I would also suggest not to just tell someone what they are doing is 'shit'. Telling someone why you aren't satisfied with their work, and possible solutions is better then the blanket statement, 'It's fucking shit.' Get aggressive and people are going to get defensive and any hope of having a conversation is thrown out the door.

But as you said, this is just opinion so take it or leave it.
 

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Really needs text skip and text speed options! While I like the .hack kind of ideas of MMO games affecting reality, it didn't really grasp me here.
 
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