VN Ren'Py Abandoned Reintegration Project [v1.0] [Azorandro]

[Azorandro]

Overview:
A series of events triggered by the death of one of your acquaintances will lead you to Balder an independent island where you will become the head of the reintegration program in a private women's prison.​

Thread Updated: 2019-05-16
Release Date: 2019-05-16
Developer: Azorandro

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OS: Windows
Language: English
Version: 1.0
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[xb]

I will not be resposable for the engrish.

 

[Scrot]

Thread Edited and Moved!

 

[blobzerz]

Shouldn't it be called "Reintegrate"? When you have typo in your title it's going to be wild engrish ride
Filename calls game Reintegration Project

 

[Scrot]

Shouldn't it be called "Reintegrate"? When you have typo in your title it's going to be wild engrish ride
Filename calls game Reintegration Project

i changed the title equal to the game filename

 

[GrimReviews]

i tried playing it but the english is so bad i quit during the introduction i just couldnt make any sense of it hopefully the english improves if it does ill give it another go until then im just gonna skip it

 

[Azorandro]

Shouldn't it be called "Reintegrate"? When you have typo in your title it's going to be wild engrish ride
Filename calls game Reintegration Project

My bad, I probably write it to fast

 

[Azorandro]

i tried playing it but the english is so bad i quit during the introduction i just couldnt make any sense of it hopefully the english improves if it does ill give it another go until then im just gonna skip it

I did not realize that was so bad. I start a rewriting !

 

[ThunderRob]

oooo..a tracksuit simulator ..HOT DAMN!!!

 

[Mondoblasto]

I start a rewriting !

Start with not spacing before using punctuation. If you're doing the writing, download Grammarly. I don't care if your system isn't set to English, you're presenting your game in English, so use the program.

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[ThunderRob]

Well..had to quit..my synapses overloaded trying to translate the engrish..i failed terribly and am forever scarred...send help.......

 

[GreenGames]

Where is the tag horror? The last three pictures are better not to watch before sleep)

 

[Flecc]

Ok That was an interesting read!! Whilst i was able to sort of decipher large chunks it will need a lot of work if you are aiming it at an English speaking audience.I understand you are not native English speaking,but would suggest taking a bit of time to clean up the spelling and grammar before you move on to future updates

 

[lorddarkam]

I did not realize that was so bad. I start a rewriting !

If i was you after reading the rude comments i would just drop it, people know only they mother language and want everyone to be perfect on it cuz they are arrogant selfish pricks

You problably learnt by yourself you should be proud keep the good work

But you need to improve so the red necks stop bullying you

 

[lorddarkam]

Ok That was an interesting read!! Whilst i was able to sort of decipher large chunks it will need a lot of work if you are aiming it at an English speaking audience.I understand you are not native English speaking,but would suggest taking a bit of time to clean up the spelling and grammar before you move on to future updates

You are one of the few who are not stupid and gave a real constructive comment

 

[lorddarkam]

If you guys are so perfect why don't offer yourself ? to do proof reading and sending a good text ?

nah too lazy ?

 

[ThunderRob]

^activist snowflake..we hurt his feels..
this is a pirate site..so expect harsh criticism ..the potential for gaining patreons here is high..and a large portion of potential patreons are english speaking people..so it is something that needs to be addressed..if he has no interest in patreons and is just doing it for fun..fine and dandy..let the engrish stand..otherwise..it really needs work.

 

[Caner12]

Will help you with the English writing if u want, i cant translate it for u but i can fix it after u translate it roughly.

 

[JeffTheGreat]

The English is bad but i love the Girls i can understand the Bad Translation and this is only v1.0 so i have a high hope because this game look Interesting.

 

[Horst_Kevin]

The Engrish is bad, but i could read most Sentences without Problems. Just some Words are really fucked up.
A Proofreader would be advantageous.

The Story has Potential. 5 Girls to reintegrate? Why not?

Renders are ok. The Lighting could be a little bit better. Also the Backrounds. They are kinda sterile.

Overall an average Start.