mintedcoffe

New Member
Aug 19, 2019
5
7
That's a hard one to recommend.

Everything is slightly "off". Everything is kind of ugly, all the characters look weird, weird skin, weird anatomy, weird compositions, weird lighting, like everything where made in a 2010's buggy version of Daz3D.

There are no choices, a absurd amount of text, a gigantic amount of characters talking to themselves (or personas or constructions or versions), the dialog is redundant, even if you hammer space non stop will still take you 20min, the dialog just goes on.

The characters behave in a weird way, not in a "real" way and not in a "porn" way, the pacing is all over the place. There is a scene with a smoking granny and the sissy that i don't know if it was supposed to be sexy or threatening, is not any of these, is just alien and bizarre.

BUT it have some nice asses thought, for real some of the best asses i've ever seen.
 
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Pumbaponpop

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Dec 24, 2023
5
105
Hello Everybody, This is me Pumba the developer of this
I would like to apologize if this is late, i didn't mean to be an arrogant ass but i was caught up with some real life issues, Now...

First of all, I would like to thank all of you who enjoyed this game and provided feedback for it, Thank you and i hope you would like more of what i want to do.

Secondly, I would like to thank Gildan for taking it upon himself and creating his script that i could learn from going forward.

Thirdly, I would like to apologize for anybody who played this game based on incorrect porn tags, I promise i will work on this the moment i can and I am very sorry if i have misled you into playing something you don't like.

Fourth, I would like to apologize for the people who believe i bring shame to the glorious craft of Visual Novels. I am sorry for disappointing you and i want you to know all your feedback was appreciated and i would certainly try to improve upon it as much as i can.

Now I would like to address some points, please..

These Renders fucking suck!

Yes I'm aware that the quality of my renders are inferior to what some other developers put out here, I can only promise to make things look better. I firmly believe there's a certain render quality to strive for but one that doesn't need to be topped, I also would like to clarify that i am pursuing quantity over quality here.

There's too much text!

Mmmmm Maybe Yeah... I did kind of go overboard with the writing

Why is there a Real Porn tag ?

Funny you should ask that, I did envision someone is going to say " There's 4 porn videos here so there should be a real porn tag and these pornstars should be credited as well" And wouldn't you know it....

Futa protag ?

I wouldn't put it that way but i'm not one to talk considering i'm the dumb guy who forgot to add the obvious protag tags. Whoever added it, I'm thankful for him because it clarified to some people.

There are no choices!

Tbh, I haven't set my mind on this one, Adding choices means double the content and after that i'd have to make sure that these choices actually matter. I don't want to add a choice that just leads to a game over.

This game feels "Off"

This one i can kind of agree with but i can only assume this is coming because of the renders which again, I promise i would do my best to improve

What's next for this game?

Beats me, This is only a hobby for me and it takes up 90% of my free time, if there's an update coming i wouldn't say it's coming for the next three months at least

Finally, I would like to thank everybody for participating, Three full pages of comments is way more attention than i imagined, so Thank you all and Goodbye for now.
 
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mintedcoffe

New Member
Aug 19, 2019
5
7
Hello Everybody, This is me Pumba the developer of this
I would like to apologize if this is late, i didn't mean to be an arrogant ass but i was caught up with some real life issues, Now...

First of all, I would like to thank all of you who enjoyed this game and provided feedback for it, Thank you and i hope you would like more of what i want to do.

Secondly, I would like to thank Gildan for taking it upon himself and creating his script that i could learn from going forward.

Thirdly, I would like to apologize for anybody who played this game based on incorrect porn tags, I promise i will work on this the moment i can and I am very sorry if i have misled you into playing something you don't like.

Fourth, I would like to apologize for the people who believe i bring shame to the glorious craft of Visual Novels. I am sorry for disappointing you and i want you to know all your feedback was appreciated and i would certainly try to improve upon it as much as i can.

Now I would like to address some points, please..

These Renders fucking suck!

Yes I'm aware that the quality of my renders are inferior to what some other developers put out here, I can only promise to make things look better. I firmly believe there's a certain render quality to strive for but one that doesn't need to be topped, I also would like to clarify that i am pursuing quantity over quality here.

There's too much text!

Mmmmm Maybe Yeah... I did kind of go overboard with the writing

Why is there a Real Porn tag ?

Funny you should ask that, I did envision someone is going to say " There's 4 porn videos here so there should be a real porn tag and these pornstars should be credited as well" And wouldn't you know it....

Futa protag ?

I wouldn't put it that way but i'm not one to talk considering i'm the dumb guy who forgot to add the obvious protag tags. Whoever added it, I'm thankful for him because it clarified to some people.

There are no choices!

Tbh, I haven't set my mind on this one, Adding choices means double the content and after that i'd have to make sure that these choices actually matter. I don't want to add a choice that just leads to a game over.

This game feels "Off"

This one i can kind of agree with but i can only assume this is coming because of the renders which again, I promise i would do my best to improve

What's next for this game?

Beats me, This is only a hobby for me and it takes up 90% of my free time, if there's an update coming i wouldn't say it's coming for the next three months at least

Finally, I would like to thank everybody for participating, Three full pages of comments is way more attention than i imagined, so Thank you all and Goodbye for now.
You are doing fine man. Everything can be improved. The important thing is that you have a base game with the story setup and motivations, if you manage to improve the content in the next releases it will be a good game.
 

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KarokaKOHORT

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Jun 16, 2018
92
65
I can see quite the potential in this story (especially the mastermind granny and would like to see more of Jolene/Viki stuff, perhaps with the latter (perhaps uncounsciously) taking part of mc's longing for acceptance to mc's detriment) and while visualy it's not on par with the high tiers, it still looks better then most works in here, so hopefully the criticisms won't demotivate the dev from continuing. The only thing that baffled me was... why the slow fade in to save screen? :D Just have it insta pop-in when right-clicking.
 
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Randomfun7583

Newbie
Jan 16, 2018
15
20
Hello Everybody, This is me Pumba the developer of this
I would like to apologize if this is late, i didn't mean to be an arrogant ass but i was caught up with some real life issues, Now...

First of all, I would like to thank all of you who enjoyed this game and provided feedback for it, Thank you and i hope you would like more of what i want to do.

Secondly, I would like to thank Gildan for taking it upon himself and creating his script that i could learn from going forward.

Thirdly, I would like to apologize for anybody who played this game based on incorrect porn tags, I promise i will work on this the moment i can and I am very sorry if i have misled you into playing something you don't like.

Fourth, I would like to apologize for the people who believe i bring shame to the glorious craft of Visual Novels. I am sorry for disappointing you and i want you to know all your feedback was appreciated and i would certainly try to improve upon it as much as i can.

Now I would like to address some points, please..

These Renders fucking suck!

Yes I'm aware that the quality of my renders are inferior to what some other developers put out here, I can only promise to make things look better. I firmly believe there's a certain render quality to strive for but one that doesn't need to be topped, I also would like to clarify that i am pursuing quantity over quality here.

There's too much text!

Mmmmm Maybe Yeah... I did kind of go overboard with the writing

Why is there a Real Porn tag ?

Funny you should ask that, I did envision someone is going to say " There's 4 porn videos here so there should be a real porn tag and these pornstars should be credited as well" And wouldn't you know it....

Futa protag ?

I wouldn't put it that way but i'm not one to talk considering i'm the dumb guy who forgot to add the obvious protag tags. Whoever added it, I'm thankful for him because it clarified to some people.

There are no choices!

Tbh, I haven't set my mind on this one, Adding choices means double the content and after that i'd have to make sure that these choices actually matter. I don't want to add a choice that just leads to a game over.

This game feels "Off"

This one i can kind of agree with but i can only assume this is coming because of the renders which again, I promise i would do my best to improve

What's next for this game?

Beats me, This is only a hobby for me and it takes up 90% of my free time, if there's an update coming i wouldn't say it's coming for the next three months at least

Finally, I would like to thank everybody for participating, Three full pages of comments is way more attention than i imagined, so Thank you all and Goodbye for now.
Well thanks for the great game no matter what you end up doing. While I would love to hear that you were definitely going to stick with this project, i understand that these kind of things can eat up your free time very quickly. Either way thanks for creating something for us and I wish you the best of luck ahead!
 
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Guyin Cognito

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Feb 23, 2018
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Hi here is my Incest + Rename Male Protagonist Mod
Download script.rpy and place it into the 'game' folder, overwriting the existing one. At the start of the game you can choose the name for Jesse and all instances of "step-son" "step-mom" were changed. If you want to review the code for your own safety just open the script.rpy with notepad and have a check. Enjoy!

That's good, and thank you for doing it, but ... the game still starts with:

" I've held [Jesse] in my arms since he was 1 year old."
" I'm more of a mother to him than his biological one."

"Granny." ... " I still remember when she met me on the street."

and

" And that must be Lily."
" Granny adopted her from an orphanage and raised her as her own."

Kind of mutes the point of removing the word "step" when they specifically state they're not related...
So, I took those lines out! Here's my altered version based on Gildan's work. New version states that Lily is Jolene's younger sister, and reframes her marriage to show she is Jesse's actual mother. Henry is still described as a "distant husband." I tried not to change anything I didn't have to, as I just started playing, and I don't know what might come up later.
 

Gildan

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Game Developer
Oct 2, 2017
193
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That's good, and thank you for doing it, but ... the game still starts with:

" I've held [Jesse] in my arms since he was 1 year old."
" I'm more of a mother to him than his biological one."

"Granny." ... " I still remember when she met me on the street."

and

" And that must be Lily."
" Granny adopted her from an orphanage and raised her as her own."

Kind of mutes the point of removing the word "step" when they specifically state they're not related...
So, I took those lines out! Here's my altered version based on Gildan's work. New version states that Lily is Jolene's younger sister, and reframes her marriage to show she is Jesse's actual mother. Henry is still described as a "distant husband." I tried not to change anything I didn't have to, as I just started playing, and I don't know what might come up later.
Thanks. I'll admit that I didn't fully check my work and all the scenarios like granny adoption. I threw it together in like 10 minutes. I mainly did it for myself but then felt I should share. I think a secondary goal is to show the dev that they should really allow the rename so we can put ourselves as the character. If this game survives for a few updates, I'll look into doing a more permanent and modular system or let one of the other excellent modders here take over. Thanks for sharing.
 

Leox1x

Member
Sep 1, 2018
175
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Thanks. I'll admit that I didn't fully check my work and all the scenarios like granny adoption. I threw it together in like 10 minutes. I mainly did it for myself but then felt I should share. I think a secondary goal is to show the dev that they should really allow the rename so we can put ourselves as the character. If this game survives for a few updates, I'll look into doing a more permanent and modular system or let one of the other excellent modders here take over. Thanks for sharing.
Is the game gonna have actually choices in game or just forced NTR ?
 

hibouboubou

Newbie
Aug 10, 2023
69
135
Bonjour à tous, c'est moi Pumba, le développeur de ce
Je voudrais m'excuser si c'est tard, je ne voulais pas être un connard arrogant mais j'étais rattrapé par des problèmes réels, maintenant...

Tout d'abord, je voudrais remercier tous ceux d'entre vous qui ont apprécié ce jeu et fourni des commentaires, merci et j'espère que vous aimeriez davantage de ce que je veux faire.

Deuxièmement, je voudrais remercier Gildan d'avoir pris sur lui et d'avoir créé son script que je pourrais apprendre à l'avenir.

Troisièmement, je voudrais m'excuser auprès de tous ceux qui ont joué à ce jeu basé sur des balises pornographiques incorrectes, je promets que j'y travaillerai dès que possible et je suis vraiment désolé si je vous ai induit en erreur en jouant à quelque chose que vous n'aimez pas.

Quatrièmement, je voudrais m'excuser auprès des personnes qui croient que je fais honte au glorieux métier des romans visuels. Je suis désolé de vous avoir déçu et je veux que vous sachiez que tous vos commentaires ont été appréciés et que j'essaierais certainement de les améliorer autant que possible.

Maintenant, je voudrais aborder certains points, s'il vous plaît.

Ces rendus sont vraiment nuls !

Oui, je suis conscient que la qualité de mes rendus est inférieure à celle proposée par d'autres développeurs ici, je ne peux que promettre d'améliorer l'apparence des choses. Je crois fermement qu'il y a une certaine qualité de rendu à atteindre, mais qu'il n'est pas nécessaire de la surpasser. Je voudrais également préciser que je recherche ici la quantité plutôt que la qualité.

Il y a trop de texte !

Mmmmm Peut-être que oui... J'ai un peu exagéré avec l'écriture

Pourquoi y a-t-il une balise Real Porn ?

C'est drôle que vous devriez demander ça, j'ai imaginé que quelqu'un dirait "Il y a 4 vidéos porno ici donc il devrait y avoir une vraie balise porno et ces stars du porno devraient également être créditées" Et vous ne le sauriez pas....

Futa protag ?

Je ne le dirais pas ainsi, mais je ne suis pas du genre à parler étant donné que je suis le gars stupide qui a oublié d'ajouter les balises protag évidentes. Quel que soit celui qui l'a ajouté, je lui en suis reconnaissant car cela a clarifié certaines personnes.

Il n'y a pas de choix !

Tbh, je n'ai pas décidé de celui-ci, ajouter des choix signifie doubler le contenu et après cela, je devrais m'assurer que ces choix comptent réellement. Je ne veux pas ajouter un choix qui mène simplement à la fin du jeu.

Ce jeu semble "Off"

Je suis plutôt d'accord avec celui-ci, mais je ne peux que supposer que cela vient à cause des rendus que, encore une fois, je promets que je ferais de mon mieux pour l'améliorer.

Quelle est la prochaine étape pour ce jeu ?

Ça me bat, ce n'est qu'un passe-temps pour moi et cela prend 90% de mon temps libre, s'il y a une mise à jour à venir, je ne dirais pas qu'elle arrive dans les trois prochains mois au moins

Enfin, je voudrais remercier tout le monde pour leur participation. Trois pages complètes de commentaires représentent bien plus d'attention que je ne l'imaginais, alors merci à tous et au revoir pour l'instant.
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Est-ce dû à la culture américaine de se plaindre tout le temps ?
Pourtant, on m'a dit que c'était nous les Français qui n'arrêtions pas de nous plaindre ?
(prends ça au sérieux, ami américain, c'est juste une petite blague)
Hello Everybody, This is me Pumba the developer of this
I would like to apologize if this is late, i didn't mean to be an arrogant ass but i was caught up with some real life issues, Now...

First of all, I would like to thank all of you who enjoyed this game and provided feedback for it, Thank you and i hope you would like more of what i want to do.

Secondly, I would like to thank Gildan for taking it upon himself and creating his script that i could learn from going forward.

Thirdly, I would like to apologize for anybody who played this game based on incorrect porn tags, I promise i will work on this the moment i can and I am very sorry if i have misled you into playing something you don't like.

Fourth, I would like to apologize for the people who believe i bring shame to the glorious craft of Visual Novels. I am sorry for disappointing you and i want you to know all your feedback was appreciated and i would certainly try to improve upon it as much as i can.

Now I would like to address some points, please..

These Renders fucking suck!

Yes I'm aware that the quality of my renders are inferior to what some other developers put out here, I can only promise to make things look better. I firmly believe there's a certain render quality to strive for but one that doesn't need to be topped, I also would like to clarify that i am pursuing quantity over quality here.

There's too much text!

Mmmmm Maybe Yeah... I did kind of go overboard with the writing

Why is there a Real Porn tag ?

Funny you should ask that, I did envision someone is going to say " There's 4 porn videos here so there should be a real porn tag and these pornstars should be credited as well" And wouldn't you know it....

Futa protag ?

I wouldn't put it that way but i'm not one to talk considering i'm the dumb guy who forgot to add the obvious protag tags. Whoever added it, I'm thankful for him because it clarified to some people.

There are no choices!

Tbh, I haven't set my mind on this one, Adding choices means double the content and after that i'd have to make sure that these choices actually matter. I don't want to add a choice that just leads to a game over.

This game feels "Off"

This one i can kind of agree with but i can only assume this is coming because of the renders which again, I promise i would do my best to improve

What's next for this game?

Beats me, This is only a hobby for me and it takes up 90% of my free time, if there's an update coming i wouldn't say it's coming for the next three months at least

Finally, I would like to thank everybody for participating, Three full pages of comments is way more attention than i imagined, so Thank you all and Goodbye for now.
Is it something due to American culture to complain all the time?
However, I was told that it was we French who never stopped complaining?
unless the French are invading this website?:unsure:
(don't take this the wrong way, American fellas, it's just a little joke;))
 
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