- Feb 11, 2018
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I like this game apart from minor issues like typo's the marginally more anoying wrong person shown saying something or the wrong line altogether the slightly bigger issue of prosuming the play made a certain choice so playing out a conversation or scene with the MC about a choice he possibly didn't make.
Examples are Spanking Clara the first time. useing the Paddel on Linda, useing the remote vibrater and butt plug on Linda. the storming into the house angry after the atempted blackmail by keira despite either having refused sex with her or better still not even having her decrypt for you in the first place.
But the reason I'm writing is because I believe that a scene is out of place and would be better moved.
There is nothing wrong with the scene it's just shown in my opinion atleast in the wrong order.
And that scene is Becky in the park after (and lets pretend you did fuck keira because lets face it most people would) Keira attemps to blackmail you.
In my humble opinion the Becky PARK scene should come before the Keira atempted blackmail not after it.
And this is why quick hands up anyone that has stayed mad for any reason after good sex?. anyone?.
Hands up anyone who as wrongly bitten the head of a innocent friend unintentionally after someone else really really pissed you off?.
Get where I'm going with this ?.
The MC storms into the house pissed he isn't mean but is a little rude and curt with the girls.
Because he is pissed of at the attempted blackmail but yet he was fine with Becky?.
So MC was still pissed off even after having great hot sexy with Becky really? (isn't that likely to take his mind of his anger not add to it).
None of it really makes sense in that order but if the MC meets Becky first then he's gonna be happy when he meets Keira who then attempts to blackmail him logically that means she not only threatens him she totally kills his buz so ofcourse he's gonna be really really pissed when he gets home.
Hence why I think them two scenes are the wrong way around the order should be Becky Park, Keira attempted Blackmaill finally MC storms in house and takes a shower.
Apart from that I'm loveing the game.
Just Sayin.
Examples are Spanking Clara the first time. useing the Paddel on Linda, useing the remote vibrater and butt plug on Linda. the storming into the house angry after the atempted blackmail by keira despite either having refused sex with her or better still not even having her decrypt for you in the first place.
But the reason I'm writing is because I believe that a scene is out of place and would be better moved.
There is nothing wrong with the scene it's just shown in my opinion atleast in the wrong order.
And that scene is Becky in the park after (and lets pretend you did fuck keira because lets face it most people would) Keira attemps to blackmail you.
In my humble opinion the Becky PARK scene should come before the Keira atempted blackmail not after it.
And this is why quick hands up anyone that has stayed mad for any reason after good sex?. anyone?.
Hands up anyone who as wrongly bitten the head of a innocent friend unintentionally after someone else really really pissed you off?.
Get where I'm going with this ?.
The MC storms into the house pissed he isn't mean but is a little rude and curt with the girls.
Because he is pissed of at the attempted blackmail but yet he was fine with Becky?.
So MC was still pissed off even after having great hot sexy with Becky really? (isn't that likely to take his mind of his anger not add to it).
None of it really makes sense in that order but if the MC meets Becky first then he's gonna be happy when he meets Keira who then attempts to blackmail him logically that means she not only threatens him she totally kills his buz so ofcourse he's gonna be really really pissed when he gets home.
Hence why I think them two scenes are the wrong way around the order should be Becky Park, Keira attempted Blackmaill finally MC storms in house and takes a shower.
Apart from that I'm loveing the game.
Just Sayin.
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