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oidex

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I found it strange to, normally it would have been flagged on download, it only flagged after i tried to run this game.
Different triggers. The one on download is signature-based detection. The runtime one is heuristic behavioral analysis, as you can see from your screenshot:
"Detected by: Behavior Shield"
 
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CamaroFan432

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Well, in some places the story still doesn't make any sense. Best example is the talk on day 7 with Lisa, Nicole and Jennifer. The MC told Lisa and Jennifer his story on earlier days and yet they react like they never heard the story during the talk. I mean, why do we get the choice to tell them, if the scene on day 7 doesn't even reflect the choices? The writing still needs some improvement, but nothing major. Something that triggerd me personally were two things. First off, if a character says "oh my god", then there is no comma between the "oh" and "my", because a comma makes it a complete different sentence. Second was the use of "I" instead of "me" in some cases. I mean the cases where for example "Lisa and I" was said. Paired with "you" instead of a name, it makes sense and sounds alright, but in cases where the MC talks to a person and mentions someone else and himself, it would definitely sound better, if he says e.g. "Lisa and me". That obviously also depends on the sentence structure and I mean the cases, where the "Name and I" was used midsentence. At the beginning it also fits, but midsentence it's grammatically wrong as far as I know. But hey, I'm no native speaker and had "only" 8 years of (Oxford) English lessons in school.
Then the renders, they're good, but the characters, especially the MC, lack impressions. He has in nearly every render the same dumb look with a blank stare and slightly opened mouth. Others do have more impressions, but at least until day 9, I couldn't count more than 4 on each person. They're either smiling, crying or laughing or have the same dumb look like the MC. There is also the lack of variety with the LIs. They basically all have large breasts with D cups or higher. Only exception that I could see until now (day 9) is Lisa with a C cup. What happend to A and B cups? Got they all killed in the world of this story?
And then lastly the (sex) scenes of other girls without the involvement of the MC. There is plenty of sex scene in the game right from the start. Best example is the start with Kelly, the game has barely started and MC is already fucking her. IMO, there is no need to show others fucking each other or masturbating with the MC miles away. It doesn't add anything to the story and it certainly doesn't let the player care more or less about them. At this point it's just a easy way for the dev to say "see, there is plenty of lewd content in it". I also don't understand the need to make every LI bi. If the girls fool around during a threesome or foursome or what ever where they're waiting for the attention of MC, fine, so be it. But the need to have them all bi? I don't see it. And like some other people, I'm not particularly fond of lesbian sex scenes, especially if they happen without or behind the back of the MC and add abso-fucking-lutly nothing to the story.
 

noxaeterna

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Feb 21, 2020
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I understand the 2 girlfriends are his right and left hand but dosen't he run a private security firm?, why has he still not called more people up from his firm at this point as backup.

Seems like you are the one that don't get it. The way he explained it. If the MC starts having sex with 1 or 2 of the girls what are the others going to do? Basicly saying they should have fun with each other because MC is busy. I say why they got to be there when MC is with the other girl. Like their whole lives revolves around sex and if they see someone else having sex they going to go into a frenzy and fuck each other? Like example 6 girls is in the living room watching tv, the MC walks in and grabs 1 of the girls and lays her down on the couch and starts to have sex, and the other 5 girls look at each other and say "Hey lets have sex with each other while MC is busy with her" That seems to be what he was saying. But for me in that senario the other 5 girls would do 1 of 2 things 1 get up and leave or 2 tell them to go to the bedroom if your going to have sex.
It is pretty clear the MC has a magic dick that turns ever girl he has sex with Bi and makes them horny 24/7, they also seem to have their atraction for each other maxed out along with the MC. At this point I feel like you need to just accept it and chalk it up to being a harem porn game. I personally feel like the relationships are moving way to fast and the first 2 girlfriends would probably quickly put their foot down after the "step sisters" and maybe a few others, but I accepted that he is going to have 30 members in his harem by the end because it is a game (and because some of the choices are yours and who the hell plays the game and does not chose yes for every hot girl that is interested to see all the scenes)
 

OnlyWorthyDevsMakeMoney

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It is pretty clear the MC has a magic dick that turns ever girl he has sex with Bi and makes them horny 24/7, they also seem to have their atraction for each other maxed out along with the MC. At this point I feel like you need to just accept it and chalk it up to being a harem porn game. I personally feel like the relationships are moving way to fast and the first 2 girlfriends would probably quickly put their foot down after the "step sisters" and maybe a few others, but I accepted that he is going to have 30 members in his harem by the end because it is a game (and because some of the choices are yours and who the hell plays the game and does not chose yes for every hot girl that is interested to see all the scenes)
The dev himself said on discord that things have gotten out of hand with all the LIs, also, he said that the timing of the game is wrong, because he realised that is not possible that a girl falls in love with him in just a day, there might be lust on the very first day, but not so much that she will accept the whole harem situation in a blink of an eye. That's why in the future the "days" will be changed to "chapters", hinting that quite some time occours between chapters.
 

noxaeterna

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The dev himself said on discord that things have gotten out of hand with all the LIs, also, he said that the timing of the game is wrong, because he realised that is not possible that a girl falls in love with him in just a day, there might be lust on the very first day, but not so much that she will accept the whole harem situation in a blink of an eye. That's why in the future the "days" will be changed to "chapters", hinting that quite some time occours between chapters.
I guess that makes sense to do, although I really feel like it makes some of the story points far more convoluted (like the part were he decides not to go back to LA for a day or 2 and see his therapist). I rewatched the part were he tells some of the people that run his father's company about what he does in LA and while it is not strictly a PMC company but for the explination that is given and the backround of the him and the girls there is no way he does not have other shooters as part of his company so the extended timeline will make it even wierder that he has not called more people in from his company yet expecially after what has gone on the in the last few updates.
 

OnlyWorthyDevsMakeMoney

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I guess that makes sense to do, although I really feel like it makes some of the story points far more convoluted (like the part were he decides not to go back to LA for a day or 2 and see his therapist). I rewatched the part were he tells some of the people that run his father's company about what he does in LA and while it is not strictly a PMC company but for the explination that is given and the backround of the him and the girls there is no way he does not have other shooters as part of his company so the extended timeline will make it even wierder that he has not called more people in from his company yet expecially after what has gone on the in the last few updates.
Well, he can't call for backup since, given the nature of this VN, all the backup should be women, and there are already too many.
But try to remember this, the dev is making this VN alone, and he is not capable of fixing all the continuity errors, yes he hired a coder to fix the script errors, but this VN is far from good, it's interesting at best for the general plot, but could use a solid remake.
 

Estius

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Was the Lisa haircut option a Patreon vote or something? Just curious. It seems like it would be a pain in the ass having to make 2 of the same renders for a friggin haircut throughout the entire game. Not to mention, a waste of time.
 

Avaron1974

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Was the Lisa haircut option a Patreon vote or something? Just curious. It seems like it would be a pain in the ass having to make 2 of the same renders for a friggin haircut throughout the entire game. Not to mention, a waste of time.
Not really a waste of time depending who you ask. I didn't like her with long hair so prefer it short.
 

JustJane

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I'm sorry but playing a harem game and complaining about the number of women is like playing a vanilla romance game and griping about how much romance there is. Or playing a NTR game and complaining about being cucked. I don't get it.
Too many girls - all girls are getting like 1 minute content. If the game has like 5 or 6 girls, there would be more content / girls. Someone even says it in the game, that the girls would have to line up for time with MC.
 

Estius

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Not really a waste of time depending who you ask. I didn't like her with long hair so prefer it short.
I guess. I think it looks good either way. I just don't think it would justify essentially doubling development time for such a small change. :unsure:
 

Avaron1974

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I guess. I think it looks good either way. I just don't think it would justify essentially doubling development time for such a small change. :unsure:
I do get what you mean. While I do appreciate it and it's a nice touch it isn't really needed and doesn't add anything to the story.
 
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