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Palatyr

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Nov 28, 2020
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well ... i've played it now as far as it got for this point
i do like it and i really dont like it
what i like is your storytelling. its a good, coherent story and it keeps me wondering about the next step or twist. its really well done!

even more so, if you look at the 'dont likes' ^^

it might be the only sexual game where i skip through the sex-scenes. why? well, because they and the characters actions are so unreal an unmotivated, they just dont catch me at all.
the story itself is cool and great. but the character building is just ... really bad. no word, no thought (,and especially the faces (mc angry?!?!?!?!?)) are anything true or what you want to indentify with.
dont get me wrong. i can follow his actions. they are true to the story. but all talking is really rediculous. you need someone to write dialogues for you, that interaction is just .... bad.
and change that angry face of his. nobody wants to look like that ever^^

still, i like the game itself. not as a porngame, cos it has no vibe. but thats because the characters are laking. the story is still good!

hope you can see this as this kind of "creative critic" people ask for :)
regards!
 

Ursus4321

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Aug 2, 2017
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I never thought I'd say this, but this harem game has a mc I can't stand. His appearance is neither handsome nor strong, so that all the girls fall for his feet enters the field of science fiction. Sometimes it is extremely cruel. Yes, there may be reasons, but there are situations that cross the line. I can't get into the character and although the story has things that hook and some girls with incredible bodies, this mc doesn't say anything to me. That is just my opinion
 

yandex

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Really excited with the addition of all the new girls, they are HOT, can't wait to bang them all lol
 
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Mookys

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Dec 19, 2022
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Hope the dev will not forget the first girls in the next update and not only focalize on the new ones.
Holly, Sandra, Rachel, Ming... not even 1 scene with the MC since the beginning of the story !

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cxx

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Nov 14, 2017
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Hope the dev will not forget the first girls in the next update and not only focalize on the new ones.
Holly, Sandra, Rachel, Ming... not even 1 scene with the MC since the beginning of the story !
well mc has been busy in house.
 

KiryuKazuma095

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Hope the dev will not forget the first girls in the next update and not only focalize on the new ones.
Holly, Sandra, Rachel, Ming... not even 1 scene with the MC since the beginning of the story !

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well you probably mean no sex scene correct???because actual scenes Sandra and Ming has with the MC and i don't know if you know this but Ming so far is the antagonist and perhaps dev does not want the MC to have sex with her but i am not sure we will see in the future
 

Mookys

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well you probably mean no sex scene correct???because actual scenes Sandra and Ming has with the MC and i don't know if you know this but Ming so far is the antagonist and perhaps dev does not want the MC to have sex with her but i am not sure we will see in the future
I mean sexual scenes.
Why would the dev add both girls (especially Ming) in the gallery and stats if no sex with them? :unsure:
 
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ThaDude1977

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Jul 5, 2022
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You don't get it, let me try to explain better: if the MC is in a relationship with 4, 5, 6 girls, and they start an orgy, IT'S FUCKING NORMAL to fuck between eachother! And this is only possible if the girls are bi (or if they are porn-actresses, but this is not the case). What is not normal is that if the MC is busy (during an orgy) with two girls, the others wait their turn without doing anything, at least they should masturbate in the meantime.
In this particular case, the whole VN evolves around a poly relationship, and you can't have a poly relationship if the girls are not bi. In fact, both the first two MC's girlfriends are bi and they fuck between eachother; then there are the "sisters" that are able to join the fun only because they started to fool around between themselves a bit first.
I've never mentioned a situation where the MC barges in and start mindlessly to fuck a girl.
That aside, this VN is made this way, you may like it or not, but you can't force the dev to change the story because someone doesn't like lesbian stuff.
No you don't get it. Why would they have an orgy if most of the girls are straight? Only ones that would join the orgy would be the Bi girls. Which is only 4 or 5 of them so far.
 
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Maviarab

Dark Lord of the Coffee
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Jul 12, 2020
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You haven't played the latest update, right? Linda was blackmailing him under his father orders. He helped Linda only because the three sisters (that he loves with all his heart) asked him to. Pay attention to the plot before making assumptons ;)
You mean...the fathers orders ;)
 
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