- Mar 9, 2020
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Well to be fair the pacing even was great - it was organic in porn terms at least banging all these women as they either loved you already or were turned to the cause (with a couple others just being used as sex objects). Issue was out of nowhere them all being invited to the mansion and falling in lust with the MC.
Most were literally saved from harrowing experiences of rape, blackmail, slavery or worse by him so he is very much a white knight in their eyes. The rest were mostly those were already part of his harem, have loved him for years. The exceptions even made sense really - Rachel and Amy are in an open relationship so sharing is just second nature to them, Sandra was talked into it after long deliberation by Emily, Karen & Jessica are paying off a debt to you, Megan and Keira are using you for their own ends and Clara is a masochist to the extreme. Only ones that was way off to me was Anya.
The real issue was the change of pace after Kayla was added out of nowhere with little fanfare as a former family harem member in herself but of course were just expected to accept she is an old shoe despite being a new face. Fair enough but now we have the 2 FBI agents who are paraded as old flames reusing the Kayla and Kate as well out of nowhere an old flame. Meanwhile 2 random reporters are wanting in on the harem with no build up, rhyme or reason and so on. Something changed since kayla was added but i dunno i certainly do not mind the plethora of sex scenes we are being treated to now but i do hope he can deliver on getting them all sexy pregnancy scenes. I am fully on board with adding new characters - the girls kidnapped for example make perfect sense from a narrative point to be added but all these ex girlfriends magically coming out of the woodwork felt kinda off as were the reporters who add nothing Amber does not already add in a better fashion (probing too deep, getting in over her head and ending up getting close to MC after rescue from doomed circumstances). Maybe things will improve as we develop all these new girls more and i think we will have more new faces to come. The step mother of course for one.
Most were literally saved from harrowing experiences of rape, blackmail, slavery or worse by him so he is very much a white knight in their eyes. The rest were mostly those were already part of his harem, have loved him for years. The exceptions even made sense really - Rachel and Amy are in an open relationship so sharing is just second nature to them, Sandra was talked into it after long deliberation by Emily, Karen & Jessica are paying off a debt to you, Megan and Keira are using you for their own ends and Clara is a masochist to the extreme. Only ones that was way off to me was Anya.
The real issue was the change of pace after Kayla was added out of nowhere with little fanfare as a former family harem member in herself but of course were just expected to accept she is an old shoe despite being a new face. Fair enough but now we have the 2 FBI agents who are paraded as old flames reusing the Kayla and Kate as well out of nowhere an old flame. Meanwhile 2 random reporters are wanting in on the harem with no build up, rhyme or reason and so on. Something changed since kayla was added but i dunno i certainly do not mind the plethora of sex scenes we are being treated to now but i do hope he can deliver on getting them all sexy pregnancy scenes. I am fully on board with adding new characters - the girls kidnapped for example make perfect sense from a narrative point to be added but all these ex girlfriends magically coming out of the woodwork felt kinda off as were the reporters who add nothing Amber does not already add in a better fashion (probing too deep, getting in over her head and ending up getting close to MC after rescue from doomed circumstances). Maybe things will improve as we develop all these new girls more and i think we will have more new faces to come. The step mother of course for one.
