- Nov 7, 2017
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Bug/Typo Report
Day 18:Trandor
Day 18:Trandor
- "Okay, If you say so." should be "Okay, if you say so."
- I believe "Tricia's licking me, while Reka's stroking me, this is the best!" is supposed to be Morty (Thoughts).
- "Now we can both go to your own dimensions!" should be "Now we can both go to our own dimensions!"
- "*gigele* You're a riot, Morty." should be "*giggle* You're a riot, Morty."
- "You're right, he'd flip if he knew I was curious about another beings dick." should be "You're right, he'd flip if he knew I was curious about another being's dick."
- "Your hips jerk a few times sending new spurts deep inside bowls." should be "Your hips jerk a few times sending new spurts deep inside her bowels."
- Every instance of Sa-Sha (Crytal?) (Samantha?) should be Sa-Sha (Crystal?) (Samantha?)
- "Especially since you wont let me use protection." should be "Especially since you won't let me use protection."
- If you tell Morticia to leave, she still hangs around in the next scene.
- After falling asleep, the baby's eyes are immediately open again before being taken away to the sleeping incubators.
- "A moment later her hole contracts. Although it still quivers as if expecting to be steched open again." should be "A moment later her hole contracts. Although it still quivers as if expecting to be stretched open again."
- When Sandra agrees to be your sex partner in the arena, there's an entire dialogue about Morty not ejaculating even though he clearly ejaculates with Lisa in every option.
- "You have to insure my transport and stay." should be "You have to ensure my transport and stay."
- I could be a wrong, but I think "Yey, you're the best, bro!" should be "Yay, you're the best, bro!"
- "Sadomize me like you did before!" should be "Sodomize me like you did before!"
- Tricia's dialogue is a bit confusing in this segment, she claims you sodomized her and jizzed in her mouth no matter what option you picked and then when questioned by Morty she immediately denies having sex even if you did. The mind erase gun explains some of it, but I think this section needs flag markers and tweaks to the dialogue for consistency/clarity.
- Just an idea, but I think Summer should mention the hole in Morty's door when she tries closing it for privacy.
- "Morticia set's your phone on the bed." should be "Morticia sets your phone on the bed."
- "So you haven't preped her at all?" should be "So you haven't prepped her at all?"
- "Morticia get's down behind Summer, spreading her butt cheeks." should be "Morticia gets down behind Summer, spreading her butt cheeks."