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FIXED! Thank you again for finding all these! It is very helpful!
Dialogue updated.
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Seasonal themed content in shows and porn games are some of my least favorite things. Often the content arrives at the wrong time (before or after the event) and when viewing it out of season, it usually feels even more out of place (a Christmas episode? In Smarch?!). This is made even worse by games that just shoving it in when it doesn't make any logical sense at in terms of the game (such as the christmas episode having NOTHING to do with the rest of the plot).
I'd be more okay with it if the content fit what was happening (i.e. in a story that takes place over a period of time, and in the story the season matches), but almost always that isn't the case.
All that being said, if I want to have some semblance of countinutiy, a (Space) Christmas day event is (sadly) needed (or fuck, I could just have a black screen that says "everyone enjoyed christmas" (but too late now because-)) I have finished the first pass on the xmas day event. All the main images are done and the writing is mostly completed (we are going to change the ending on it). I still have some additional small elements to make, but for the most part I think it came out, passable...
Anyhow, back to work. Thanks for staying awesome!
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Aw, I actually really like seasonal events! It’s fun for me to see a game tackle the spirit of the holiday in its own way, and because its a relatively common subject to tackle, its fun in a comparitive sense with other games. Halloween gives an excuse for spooky fun and costumed heroines, while Christmas often allows a heartwarming moment between the cast. Valentines day is often a slam dunk as well in these kinds of scenarios.
I do understand the logic issues though, more often than not a game will create a time parodox with holiday events and it’ll be like “didn’t we just have this other holiday, how does that make sense?”
Otherwise, I’m happy to see them. For this game specifically, I really like the Halloween event, Valentines Day was decent with the right girl choice I’d say, and (Space) Christmas was nice with the new character. That being said, I don’t think we need any more… more R&M specific scenarios from Ferdafs in the future, hopefully.
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Don't bother overthinking it. You could explain it away as a quirk of the dimension if you're worried about continuity.
nice art
- Nov 7, 2017
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Bug/Typo Report
Day 28: Church Play
Day 29: Roy
Day 32: The Mall
Day 28: Church Play
- "Head to chuch?" should be "Head to church?"
- In the church Morty is confused about Tricia unlocking her phone with her nipple even though he already saw her do that in the hot tub.
- "You take a step towards Your little sister and push your huge cock into her mouth." should be "You take a step towards your little sister and push your huge cock into her mouth."
- "You cover your little sister in your jiz." should be "You cover your little sister in your jizz."
- "Oh my God, I can't believe you're whole thing went inside me just now!" should be "Oh my God, I can't believe your whole thing went inside me just now!"
- "Oh my God, you're whole thing just went inside me!" should be "Oh my God, your whole thing just went inside me!"
- "Your little sister sphincter muscle keeps squeezing you, trying to make you cum again." should be "Your little sister's sphincter muscle keeps squeezing you, trying to make you cum again."
- "Your twin sister's pussy tightens up as you start cuming inside her." should be "Your twin sister's pussy tightens up as you start cumming inside her."
- "OOoooo~, if you're really bigger than me I rather jerk you off!" should be "OOoooo~, if you're really bigger than me I'd rather jerk you off!"
- "We're flexible to fulfil any task requested of us, and since most of those are sexual-" should be "We're flexible to fulfill any task requested of us, and since most of those are sexual-"
- Starting at the line "We want more! I'm Mr.Meesex look at me" the middle Meesex twitches slightly during his eyeblink animation.
- "I never thought this could feels so incredible...!" should be "I never thought this could feel so incredible...!"
- "That way everyone will know what a deprived harlot you are!" should be "That way everyone will know what a depraved harlot you are!"
- "Anit-Morty leads her to the encampment under the bridge." should be "Anti-Morty leads her to the encampment under the bridge."
- "Your cum is So warm and yummy!" should be "Your cum is so warm and yummy!"
- "Even though they're trying to hide it, I can feel them groping my breasts and things." should be "Even though they're trying to hide it, I can feel them groping my breasts and thighs."
- "I rather feel your asshole raw." should be "I'd rather feel your asshole raw."
- "There's no way you can finish in two minutes!" needs to be changed to a Jessica line.
Day 29: Roy
- "You quickly realize what she's talking about and blush away." should be "You quickly realize what she's talking about and blush right away."
- "That was a lot faster then when we gave him a footjob in the hot tub." should be "That was a lot faster than when we gave him a footjob in the hot tub."
- "You find your mascot suit hanging right where you left it, against you're locker door." should be "You find your mascot suit hanging right where you left it, against your locker door."
- "It's just a synthesised voice, Morty. I can use it wherever I want." should be "It's just a synthesized voice, Morty. I can use it wherever I want."
- At the line "You move to the other side of your room and whisper into the walky-talky." Morty's Nazi armband is missing the arrow symbols. Beth's arrow symbols are also missing in the following scene.
- "Ahh~ Nonesense, I can do this all day!" should be "Ahh~ Nonsense, I can do this all day!"
- "Who know's how they're torturing her to make her cry like that..." should be "Who knows how they're torturing her to make her cry like that..."
- I believe the Beth cumshot transition occurs a few lines too early. The dialogue says you shoot your load inside when the image shows Morty already pulled out.
- "I ended up coming before him..." should be "I ended up cumming before him..."
- "Wow, you're a chronic little masturbater, aren't you..." should be "Wow, you're a chronic little masturbator, aren't you..."
- "You reach out and grab one of your big sister." should be "You reach out and grab one of your big sister's breasts."
- "Holy shit, he keeps coming!" should be "Holy shit, he keeps cumming!"
- The image of Summer cleaning herself after sex has cum dripping from her pussy even if you pulled out.
Day 32: The Mall
- "Even as he is now, he wont ever let me go." should be "Even as he is now, he won't ever let me go."
you've outdoned yourself NM this was way better from what i had initially anticipated, i might share my useless and probably redundant final thoughs another time, when i don't feel completely exausted from way too much time in a day spent in a remake of a porn game, for now i'll just give you a very generous round of applause for the marvelous piece of media you and your team managed to sculpt, its so very well done that i am pretty certain there will never be another "similar" work of this calibur, very well done!.
Not one of the devs but I really appreciate you doing this, I considered it myself but I decided I was both not bothered enough and too lazy to do so. Absolute legend.
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Thanks mate! I felt the same way for a long time, but after playing this game more times than I can remember I decided I wanted to contribute where I was able. It's just a shame I don't have any art expertise or else I could've offered more than just walls of text.
- Oct 1, 2020
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Downloads on the first page...
By upload u mean typos ? - just post the sentence and your correction, there's no GIT for this VN
Although Smudgey ought to have catched most of 'em by now.
By upload u mean typos ? - just post the sentence and your correction, there's no GIT for this VN
Although Smudgey ought to have catched most of 'em by now.
- Jun 2, 2018
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Fixed! Thank you again for all your help finding these!
Yeah, issue is in the original art. I did notice it during the scene implementation, but it's a time consuming fix so I just let it go. I'll put it on the bug list, but not one I'm likely to get to soon.
Glad you enjoyed it! It always makes my day when people have a chance to experience this game that they might have otherwise passed or given up on due to... issues, with the original.
I very much appreciate all the help you have provided in finding these issues! You have certainly helped make the game better and I am very thankful for all the issues you've found.
- Nov 7, 2017
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Bug/Typo Report
Day 32: Attack From Behind
This isn't an error, I just think it's really stupid that Morty suddenly forgets he has an infinite credit card for the sake of creating this argument with Beth.
Not sure this matters, but a chapter in day 25 is also called "Sleepover"
Day 32: Attack From Behind
- "So, I can fuck her but I still can't come?" should be "So, I can fuck her but I still can't cum?"
- "I seriously doubt that. Sound more like dumb luck..." should be "I seriously doubt that. Sounds more like dumb luck..."
- Whenever Morty exits the Narnia portal, a black line scrolls down the entire screen as the portal closes. I'm not sure if this is reproducable or just an issue with my PC specifically.
- When Jessica starts her boobjob, it says she takes off her bra even though she removed it much earlier in the scene.
- "You do a few quick hard thrust inside Summer." should be "You do a few quick hard thrusts inside Summer."
- "Fuck, I'm cumming, , sis~!" should be "Fuck, I'm cumming, sis~!"
- I think Morty's vaginal cumshot image needs to be displayed earlier at the line "Ah, it's so hot~...", currently it only lasts a single frame long after Morty says he's cumming.
- "You and Summer step out of the portal and back into the the garage." should be "You and Summer step out of the portal and back into the garage."
- "While you are struggling with your pant's Morticia dashes off." should be "While you are struggling with your pants Morticia dashes off."
- "It seems like she picked a showing that is pretty far away, and you start to feel nervous that you wont make it." should be "It seems like she picked a showing that is pretty far away, and you start to feel nervous that you won't make it."
- "Without really thinking about it, your eye's drift down to her breasts." should be "Without really thinking about it, your eyes drift down to her breasts."
- If you choose to pullout while not wearing a condom, the vaginal animation continues despite the dialogue implying otherwise.
- "But I'm taking birth control, so it should matter." should be "But I'm taking birth control, so it shouldn't matter."
- I'm a little confused about the phrase "warm stop in my belly." I think the line is supposed to be "His sperm is so hot it feels like I have a warm spot in my belly."
- "We have bigger problems then that, Morty!" should be "We have bigger problems than that, Morty!"
- "Tricia's jumps you forcing your entire body to lean on the tree." should be "Tricia jumps on you, forcing your entire body to lean on the tree."
- "But, why is my heart's beating so fast...?" should be "But, why is my heart beating so fast...?"
- The line "Wow, there's so much precum..." needs to be changed from Tricia (Phone) to Tricia's Voice
- Not a typo, but Tricia repeats the phrase "I'm just saying" in two lines back to back.
- The line "Ah~ No, Mff~ moving like this-" needs to be changed from Tricia (Phone) to Tricia's Voice
- "Mmff~ Your cocks too big though-" should be "Mmff~ Your cock's too big though-"
- "Planetina fly's out of the doughnut shop before you can even finish your sentence." should be "Planetina flies out of the doughnut shop before you can even finish your sentence."
This isn't an error, I just think it's really stupid that Morty suddenly forgets he has an infinite credit card for the sake of creating this argument with Beth.
- "Plus, this woman much older than me!" should be either "Plus, this woman looks much older than me!" or "Plus, this woman is much older than me!"
- At the line "Come here, little buddy. Come on, come on, come on, I gotcha.", Planetina's eyes are visible without the rest of her body. (I kinda enjoy how it makes her seem like a stealth creature honestly.)
Not sure this matters, but a chapter in day 25 is also called "Sleepover"
- "She squeezes your hand while moving her hips up an down your cock." should be "She squeezes your hand while moving her hips up and down your cock."
- "Planetina's squeezes your hand as her pussy tightens around your cock." should be "Planetina squeezes your hand as her pussy tightens around your cock."
- Jun 2, 2018
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Fixed! Thank you again for all your help finding these! I don't often replay the whole game at this point, mostly I just focus on new content, so finding past bugs largely falls to players. These reports have been extremely helpful in squashing lots of issues I would have never found on my own!
Tried on two different PCs and my phone (and android emulator) and can't get the issue to appear. The door displays via a wipeup/wipedown command, which shouldn't include a black line at all. So... not sure how else to fix it other than changing the command use to display it... I guess I could use a crop instead? will give it a try (althought won't be able to see if it actually fixes the issue).
This one is tricky to move, as an animation is playing for the previous 4 lines (which are all Summer lines). Additional dialogue could be added to extend the time on screen, but I'm not sure it's needed.
Yeah, I didn't make a new image, and tried to just imply what Morty had done (unforunitly, the animation is a bit buggy, which ruins the effect...) I might make a new image, working on other stuff at the moment and not sure I have time.
The infinite credit card doesn't exist in the original game, so when I run into dialogue like this (talking about a money reason Morty can't do something) I have two options, rewrite the dialogue, or work around it.
Usually, I just prefer to re-write it, because that is the least problematic. However in this case, this is a scene taken directly from the show, so I wanted to minimize the dialogue alterations. It does unfortunately have the side effect of Morty seeming to be very stupid for it.
Yeah, some names are going to repeat. Mostly, the titles are there to give the idea of the content, not necessarily to be unique (only so many cleaver things I can come up with that will fit space wise).
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Yeah I figured this one was probably an issue caused by my videocard somehow. I've got a recorded example if that helps at all, but it is a minor issue so I understand if it can't be fixed.
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Yeah, that very much looks like a graphical artifact since it only happens on 1 frame halfway down (and not through the whole thing). Not sure I can fix it without changing the animation.
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Well to be more specific, the black line follows the top of door's border and flickers intermittently all the way down. Like I said before, if isn't reproducible on your end then do not worry about it, there's no need to waste time with niche' cases that don't effect everyone.