Just going through this again from the start(my save got 'compromised') and I can't help but wonder what that lowest mark on Karla's 'size-mometer' reads, it's just a bit too streched to tell.
Also, the scene ends with "From this point own..." instead of 'on'.
Oh, and Nayla says "I'm finna slap the shit outta of you...", it's ackshually 'outta you' not 'outta of you'.
Btw, I really appreciate the effort of mirroring the image Karla sent.
"How did you get her so quick by the way?" Ironic misspelling given the way we met Karla but it should probably be 'get here'.
I know the spelling of onomatopoeia's doesn't really matter but usually it's 'smooch' rather than 'smouch'.
"I don't think I can't stop breathing in his scent." is a double negative.
"I kept repeating this to myself this as I pace up and down on the treadmill." 'this' is used twice, probably from changing the sentence a bit partway through writing.