Vampira

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Nov 24, 2017
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The art is pretty decent, but I'm not that invested enough to want to grind away. I'll leave this for a few updates and check back in.
 

Apostate

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Oct 14, 2017
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Insane grind level. All I do is give compliments in the morning, study math, occasionally watch TV or perv on step-mom in the shower, then jack off at night. That's it. No way to do anything else. Never thought I'd play a game where you're visited by the goddess of lust who promises you chicks out the wazoo but then all you do is study math and jack off. Charm level 10 but no charm level counter. Compliment/Affection level 10+ for all main characters but no counter for that either. No way to raise any other powers of the ring and no counter for what level they're at. Lust buildup is 1-4 per day but it takes 100 lust points before anything happens .... so about 35-50 days. And, apparently, you can blow 50 lust points just accomplishing one small task. And of course this ignores the text, which I basically just scroll past due to the poor english. So yeah, definitely, totally not worth it. And that's really sad too because the models and story concept are really smoking hot.
 

Devka

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May 8, 2017
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Started a new game and was able to get the stepmom to show up in the kitchen in the afternoon.
 
Aug 16, 2017
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just tried this out for first time...….and I had to stop.

I nearly died laughing at some of the 'engrish' translation...especially declaming French poetry....I agree...I have always said there is something fishy about French poetry.....all those clams invading dry land and becoming the bane of librarians and bookshop owners all over Europe.....and don't even get me started on what the cockles and winkles have been plotting :D

if nothing more, I was entertained but, why is it that even when they use some translation tool devs STILL fail to spell check?

the story is just half-assed and the renders are ok. not great but good enough. I dunno much about the grind as, for obvious reasons I haven't got that far and may never do so. I didn't see anything to make this standout and no evidence that it will change and I think what I have seen of this feed confims that.

my prediction : once played easily forgotten
 

Armorer

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Oct 28, 2017
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If one was to "fix" this games core issues 1) Fix the damn grind Make it do x10 what it's currently doing. Essentially the MC spends about 6 to 10 weeks to advance a single character and that might be bugged anyway. 2) English grammar and spelling


IMOHO forget this one for a while. Hopefully the Dev gets a clue.
 

gestved

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Aug 18, 2017
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Played through the intro. This game has the bad habit of telling what's happening, not really showing. Not a good sign for a VISUAL novel

and both sex scenes from intro are too dark.

And the dialogs are way overboard, people don't talk like real people in this game, and they talk too much, feels like the dev is too lazy to make renders and tries to compensate with text.
 
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Last Moment

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May 26, 2017
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I like this game, but still no much content.
the really problem about it, is you must be in exact stats to see scenes.
 

razzia

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Apr 14, 2018
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Tried to play the game but the language was burning my eyes and trying to understand it melting my brain.
And english is not even my native language. But there are just too many non-sense.
 
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LordStrike

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Tried to play the game but the language was burning my eyes and trying to understand it melting my brain.
And english is not even my native language. But there are just too many non-sense.
i do have to agree with you.
 
Mar 3, 2018
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This is brilliant. The writing is blowing my mind here. No disrespect to the author; I do totally understand that English is not their first language, but unlike other games where the English translations have barely a semblance of grammar and writing style tying it together, this game has boosted it up to Shakespearean heights. I mean any more formal and the writing would be something that you'd find in Chaucer or Beowulf.

Jokes apart, I would recommend getting someone who has proper bilingual fluency to get the texts translated. Or maybe share the raw translations with someone on the forum who can help and have them re-script it in a more believable text.

I will withhold reviewing or commenting on the actual game, since I haven't progressed beyond the first few screens, but felt it was necessary to put my point forward; the game feels like a Victorian Era Porn based on the writing style.
 
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hugo_123

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This is brilliant. The writing is blowing my mind here. No disrespect to the author; I do totally understand that English is not their first language, but unlike other games where the English translations have barely a semblance of grammar and writing style tying it together, this game has boosted it up to Shakespearean heights. I mean any more formal and the writing would be something that you'd find in Chaucer or Beowulf.

Jokes apart, I would recommend getting someone who has proper bilingual fluency to get the texts translated. Or maybe share the raw translations with someone on the forum who can help and have them re-script it in a more believable text.

I will withhold reviewing or commenting on the actual game, since I haven't progressed beyond the first few screens, but felt it was necessary to put my point forward; the game feels like a Victorian Era Porn based on the writing style.
yeah my friend you are right my english is not good because my teacher is the worst and yup we need better people who to work in school
 
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yeah my friend you are right my english is not good because my teacher is the worst and yup we need better people who to work in school
Ain't that the truth. I was lucky that I got some kick-ass teachers in English; today I can read, write and communicate better in English than I can in my native tongue. I feel confident and competent when I start writing in English, because after a point I started thinking in English. And it helps when you're mom has a masters degree in Classical Literature. :biggrin:

But yeah, I get your point. Most of whom I know have difficulty expressing themselves in English and it all can be attributed back to a lack of seminal foundation in the language. And I've found that most of the issues crop up due to the fact that people think in their native tongue and try translating it to English; not a very sound approach cause it effectively kills any writing style. The style of writing builds up from the actual grammar of the language. There's no guarantee that a sentence constructed in a specific style in a specific language's grammar can translate the style along with the actual text. That is why, the first thing I tell others is to start thinking in English. That helps building a style of writing and speaking.

And I've found this to be true on the flip side as well. I started learning Deutsch, aber mein Deutch ist nicht gut. And I know the problem there. I think in English, translate to German and then I have a hot mess of a sentence. That's why I try avoiding building complex sentences.:FuckYea:
 
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