I am no fan of magic and mind control. Its always the easy and cheap way to sex. Then the englisch is really bad - not as bad as some other games and you can still understand whats happening, so its ok. But then they try to impress the women with very high-pitched texts and everything falls apart because of the bad translation and spelling mistakes. Moreover, the setting seems even more absurd and it drags you out of immersion again and again. The stepmother's tits are also a bit too big - at times they just seem too over the top. I'm always for big boobs, but they still have to fit somehow, otherwise it will be silly.
The little "sister" also looks kind of strange, I can't say exactly why, but the proportions are off.
All in all a very average game so far with the usual quirks.
Edit: And I forgot the all so common and useless grindfest ... dont't understand what some devs think they or their players gain by adding this shit... most ppl will just skip it by console bc no one likes it. There are only a few games that got this right with some mild grind with purpose and a good reward.