Takkatakka
Engaged Member
- Nov 11, 2022
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Won't lie, I was a bit let down with this update. I still support the game on Patreon but it's just like.. I don't know. The animations were fantastic but the storytelling felt like it was trying to hit a word count at points. I'm trying to frame this more as constructive criticism than whining (but I'm no writer myself), but it felt like a few scenes of
"I enter the restaurant"
You want burger?
"Yes I want burger"
Okay I'll bring it out
"My burger arrives"
Here's your food!
"I eat, it was good"
How was the food?
"It was good!"
It just felt like not as quality as I was used to. It's likely I'm in the minority here, it just felt a bit off I guess
Sorry, but these two posts back to back are just too funny.Well my friends, what a chapter! And what talent for writing and narrative construction. This developer is definitely a genius!
And the animations, damn it, incredible!
In short, again very, very good work and this VN remains
first place in my favorites.
No bugs on my side, this update is solid in every way.
Congratulations Jestur.
I still hope to find Skylar soon![]()
Edit: Also Cockburn will now be the last name I'll use in future games that allow you to pick one.