Played for the first time.
I thought the worst Engrish was made by us, Russians, but I was wrong. Dev's style is easy to read but a lot of mistakes in grammar, wrong articles ("an" instead of "a") and missed verbs (like verb "is" and its forms) - simple reading becomes torture. More of that, that Engrish messes with storyline. Game time jumps from present to past and back and I was wandering "Why is he calling his wife his girlfriend? Where was warning that we're in the past?"
I really wish dev will find good proofreader, Engrish aside I like this game. MC is certainly has its own tastes (especially in movies), its own morals, sexual preferences (and he's not the only one), but it's funny and interesting to read.