Is there a girl in this who isn't a toilet? Every girl I've met so far has had some dude balls deep in her hole. Even his wife is a dumb slut. Scraping up sloppy seconds everywhere this so called "Crime Lord".
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there is an open marriage variable in the game, so I think it will be a possibility, but as far as actual sex go the is only cheating, they'll probably have a conversation in the future
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What an horrible english the writer has, goddamit, english isn't my native language either, but man, i wouldn't start writing a VN because i know that my english is far of being perfect, but things like " i hug her" " i drink my beer and then i will go home" and things like that it's fucking annoying and breakes the imersion, it's sounds like the MC is a caveman. So i highly recommend the author to find time to proof writing.
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You might want to tag that in the Genre description as "NTR (avoidable)," would help get more eyes on your game as I know many a people look at that first post and if they don't see something saying its avoidable they just close the page and move on.
There will be an open marriage route and it will be independent of the NTR route.
Thanks for the tip.
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Izirider, I really loved your writing. There is meaning behind every sentence exchanged, and thought heard, if you are patient enough to read it. The plot is great, and the twists keep me on my toes. The character motivations & development hit the right chords with me. I really liked the MC (or atleast my version of him), and Tony as well. Very few games can boast having badass antiheroes, who are also damaged in their own way. Great work man, you have a fan.
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world's longest index finger...someone went goofy on the gunsize-slider 
i've held an S&W 500 which is a massive hand cannon...this..is the 500 Asgardian Giant's edition
i've held an S&W 500 which is a massive hand cannon...this..is the 500 Asgardian Giant's edition
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Well, for one, that's NOT a Sig Sauer 500. THAT looks more like a Taurus Raging Bull. Which is a 44 mag.world's longest index finger...someone went goofy on the gunsize-slider
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i've held an S&S 500 which is a massive hand cannon...this..is the 500 Asgardian Giant's edition
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i means S&W smith and wesson..but i'm old and type like shit
luckily i typed it correct on my discord well before i posted here...so the folks that matter know
luckily i typed it correct on my discord well before i posted here...so the folks that matter know
Either way, the Taurus is a meaty weapon. If that guy fires it at that range, even the guy holding the one dude is going to have a pretty shitty day. Ahahahahai means S&W smith and wesson..but i'm old and type like shit
luckily i typed it correct on my discord well before i posted here...so the folks that matter know
It could be an S&W 500 though. But the barrel looks a lot like the Taurus. Both are meaty weapons.