VN Ren'Py Rise of the Crime Lord [v0.12b Alpha 2 Extended] [IziRider]

[ProofreadingRUS]

What happened?
That's where it ended last time and that was last year.
Is it the saves that are messed up?

 

[Moricano]

Tons of translation errors corrected in the prologue and in one third of Chapter 3. Thanks LouWill for that!

In this version mine continues to give error or open the game.

 

[Sk8587]

android please ?

 

[cesare.g56]

Wait! What the fuck! Tim’s the best looking male character ever, unlike Rick. What a disappointment! I’m so fucking sick seeing charmless MCs. No way, no way, no way... Deleted this too.

 

[Izirider]

Izirider missed a translation View attachment 614751

Thanks, I will correct.

 

[BoomDaBoom]

Will the walkthrough be updated? I see that there's a few scenes with Miri but I can't seem to get it.

 

[Spawn420]

someone needs to proof read this ASAP!
a lot of he/she and his/hers mistakes as well as some places where its the girls talking but it shows as if the MC is talking/thinking and just general bad translations as well as some scenes where the start isn't translated at all then goes back to 'normal' english..

other then the english issues this shows great potential and i like where the story is heading so far so keep up the good work!

 

[christoprd]

Will the walkthrough be updated? I see that there's a few scenes with Miri but I can't seem to get it.

me too

 

[Mormont]

It was a nice scene between the MC and Cora especially if we tell her everything my surprise at how much the other women fear her she looked ready to rip the other women apart I'd hate to imagine what she would do to us if she caught Rick with another woman.

 

[anwar]

Will mc ever find out his wife cheated on him?

 

[0011]

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[RoadWulf]

You definitely need to have this LouWill guy correct the rest of the game. It gets to about the part with Weasel and his Girlfriend and I basically spend all my time trying to figure out what's supposed to be said.

 

[BarbarrossaNA]

Actually not a bad set up and story at all.. But then I hit a scene at the bar. Rick, (I'm taking a look at her top. Her disgusting glance was artificial, but her smile didn't.) and I'm like WTF just happened here? Seems like someone has worked on some of it and needs to continue.. Do have to say enjoyed renders and this game definitely has potential.. especially with proofreading.. 5/10, a decent upside possible with someone rewriting into normalized speech.

 

[JokerLeader]

It was a nice scene between the MC and Cora especially if we tell her everything my surprise at how much the other women fear her she looked ready to rip the other women apart I'd hate to imagine what she would do to us if she caught Rick with another woman.

Her character is really good, i'm going for a loyal spouse route with her. She Kicks Ass.

 

[JokerLeader]

Izirider Will the walkthrough be updated?
I would like to see if some choices were the best for the rpath that i'm going.

P.S. Love the game, the update was awesome, thank you.

 

[Izirider]

Izirider Will the walkthrough be updated?
I would like to see if some choices were the best for the rpath that i'm going.

P.S. Love the game, the update was awesome, thank you.

Thanks
Yes, the walkthrough will be updated. I'll try to do it next week.

Will mc ever find out his wife cheated on him?

Yes, at one point.

 

[SecretDesire]

Izirider hey is there a way to get rid of wife and go for Ashley or Miri ? or you plan on doing because she cheated MC. (player choice ofc. but she did it)

 

[JokerLeader]

Thanks
Yes, the walkthrough will be updated. I'll try to do it next week.


Yes, at one point.

No, thank you.

I gotta say i allways enjoy this game, but i restart the game with this new update and for some reason i liked even more.

Hope to see a stronger bound between Cora and Rick, i really like her.

 

[anwar]

Yes, at one point.

Good to know.
One more question I read the walkthrough and it says if you wants to divorce your wife you have to choose some specific options like when she says I love you the next day she cheated on MC you have to select "OK" instead of "me to". So my question is, is it possible to leave MC's wife when he find out she cheated on him even if we were not on divorce path till that point?

 

[JokerLeader]

Izirider hey is there a way to get rid of wife and go for Ashley or Miri ? or you plan on doing because she cheated MC. (player choice ofc. but she did it)

There's a divorce path, the night she cheats on Rick, when she comes home, she says i love you if you choose OK you are on the divorce path