The internal dialogue is a bit overdone imo. Despite english not being your native tongue I thought overall it was fine. There were a few scenes where the dialogue box showed the wrong person's name when someone was speaking it wasn't too hard to figure out, but hopefully it will be fixed. We haven't gone very far into the story, but so far it's ok. I would prefer if the Mom wasn't dead, but we'll see what happens... the whole consequences thing imo is a bad idea, it would be better to go with a harem typically speaking. It's your choice, but it is a really popular story arc. Especially with killing off the Mom. Either way good luck dev.
Thanks for your kind words. I was getting desparate to get the game out, so i might have ignored those mistakes. But I will see and fix the mistakes in the next update.
I know the mom's might have sadden many people, but it was necessary. I dont give any spoiler now. So, cant tell why.
I am a harem ending fan too. But i dont think i am capable enough of thinking any ideas that will make sense of the harem ending. Comparing with the main plot story level.
But the game is just in early release. And the multiple endings with the girls are all sub plots which do not and will not affect the main plot in anyway.
So, if i can think something, that will make sense of the harem ending. I will put it(harem ending) in the game