Unity [RJ313648] Etching Edge - Succubus Stronghold Seduction

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Dimava

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v1.2.1 with English translation by me and Toy Integration ( handy / OSR / Intiface (buttplug.io ) by to4st
 
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TheeSonus

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v1.2.1 with English translation by me and Toy Integration ( handy / OSR / Intiface (buttplug.io ) by to4st
Very nice. Should I just report any typos and such I find to you? Like for example, the text wrapping in this scene here is very strange. And for some reason, the slime girl has no dialogue at all (though I don't remember if it was like that in the original game, granted).
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If these can't be fixed or something, then just let me know. But aside from that, once I finish this version, I intend on making a game request thread with it (assuming no one else does it before me). Do you have any complaints about that?
 

Dimava

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Very nice. Should I just report any typos and such I find to you?
Just edit the dialogue_dump.json, doesn't even require to reopen the game I think, just the room
Note that spaces are nbsp so it doesn't try to break lines on every word
I've generated tl with Gemini 2.5 Pro and formatted linebreaks with some simple logic so it may be incorrect in some cases

If you can change tl back to original, check how it looked like and fix it it'd be great

You may polish it and drop the json here and on eroscripts if you want
Aldo please find places with untranslated texts - I only know names in character intros, chapter intros, and keybing images
 

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Aldo please find places with untranslated texts - I only know names in character intros, chapter intros, and keybing images
Untranslated stuff:
- All enemy names are untranslated.
- All stage intro text is untranslated.
- Stage 3 "secret" text is not translated (text that appears when you peep on the girl in the hot spring)
- Most "Game over in stage" text is untranslated (though I've never gotten any of these things as game overs, so I don't know if you actually can or if they're gallery exclusive).

Unsure whether it's a translation issue or main game issue:
- Blue Slime Girl has no text.
- Stage 2 boss has no text.
- Alraune has no text.
- Pirate Crew Girl has no text.
- Whatever the fuck you call the triple head thing has no text.
- Stage 5 final generic enemy (i have no clue how to describe her besides that, the blonde gal with reverse amazon position) has no healthbar.
- Stage 5 gimmick end text reuses prior mid-point text.
- Stage 5 boss phase 2 has no text.

I just completed the game, and this is a pretty comprehensive list of all the "issues", so to speak, that I found. Most of them I don't know if they're just an issue with the game itself or not, but there are some things that I know are real.

And as a side note (this goes to everyone out there, not just Dimava), I have three questions:
1 - Does anyone know where in the main game you find the vampire girl? At least I assume she's a vampire anyways. She's locked in the gallery even after completing the game, I had to use the "release" code to actually unlock her. I feel like I've seen her before though, but I just can't remember where.
2 - Does anyone know how to get the second animation on the mechanic girl in stage 4? I only ever get the first one.
3 - Does anyone know if it's possible to somehow remove the spider girl game over cut-in? Since the animation behind it clearly changes and keeps going after a few seconds, but the cut-in remains on screen and blocks it. And the dev just... never fixed that, for some reason.
 
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