- Thread starter Robbery1211
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someone like black chicks i see 
wait ? is that because the MC is black ?... i hope not, i always find completly ridiculous how racist stuff can be about that.
soo yeah.. i hope its not because of that ( as i see white chicks in banner too :/ )
wait ? is that because the MC is black ?... i hope not, i always find completly ridiculous how racist stuff can be about that.
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soo yeah.. i hope its not because of that ( as i see white chicks in banner too :/ )
oh and good luck of course .
nice to see a black guy who isnt NTR or bad shit in game but actualy are Mc
nice to see a black guy who isnt NTR or bad shit in game but actualy are Mc
I hear you. I am working on getting better looking characters now. Thanks for the feedback
- Apr 30, 2017
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By porn game standards, the story is pretty original, lots of possibilities by not being constrained to a few locations and the positive father figure and good friends are always a win in my book.
The writing, however, leaves a lot to be desired, I see bad punctuation and grammar at places, over-reliance on narration instead of dialogues and overall, just too much happening too fast. That's especially noticeable with the side characters that don't even get to talk or interact and instead just are have their actions told by the MC before moving on.
The option to name people also felt out of place considering they all have names and relationships pre-established.
The UI also needs work, loose words across the screen don't work at all, at places it's not even possible to read because there's a white font on white BG, you need proper buttons or least add effects (shadow, stroke, maybe a gradient) to add more contrast in different colors of background.
The writing, however, leaves a lot to be desired, I see bad punctuation and grammar at places, over-reliance on narration instead of dialogues and overall, just too much happening too fast. That's especially noticeable with the side characters that don't even get to talk or interact and instead just are have their actions told by the MC before moving on.
The option to name people also felt out of place considering they all have names and relationships pre-established.
The UI also needs work, loose words across the screen don't work at all, at places it's not even possible to read because there's a white font on white BG, you need proper buttons or least add effects (shadow, stroke, maybe a gradient) to add more contrast in different colors of background.
- May 10, 2018
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my great grandfather was black and married a first nations gal..but he'd roll over in his grave is he was in an adult game :O their daughter married an englishman whos son married the daughter of scots/english pairing and voila..you got mesomeone like black chicks i see
wait ? is that because the MC is black ?... i hope not, i always find completly ridiculous how racist stuff can be about that.
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soo yeah.. i hope its not because of that ( as i see white chicks in banner too :/ )
outside of inana and AL its hard to think of any games where a black man and white woman couple without ntr or racist stereotypes being tossed about..so if this is a good-guy black man who boinks anything of any colour that moves..thats fresh..lolmy great grandfather was black and married a first nations gal..but he'd roll over in his grave is he was in an adult game :O their daughter married an englishman whos son married the daughter of scots/english pairing and voila..you got me
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- Oct 4, 2017
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She's not naked, the one is wearing a piece of string, and the other is wearing a very thin, see-through piece of cloth.. they are totally dressed
- Nov 7, 2018
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I like the concept of this game a lot. Keep tweaking and working on it. It has great potential, plus it's no games out like it.
- Oct 4, 2017
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giving every single character that you meet a nickname was getting pretty monotonous... I started with stupid nicknames like "slut-face" then I just got bored and it became "ongaifgunao"
I was thinking of making changing their name a menu item. If you don't manually go to the menu and change their names then they remain the preset names. What do you think?
Warning, don't force rollback it will break the game. On that same note, not having rollback is annoying if you misclick you can't re-read.
Check how Being a DIK did the nicknames. It's a phone app in game and you get to see name and nicknames.
- Oct 4, 2017
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@Robbery1211 ok, I see what you were trying to do, yeah that might be a little better, it won't interrupt the story as much. You can put a disclaimer in the intro that you can change the names in the menu. I know the game Yellow Family has a similar feature in the inventory or whichever
Edit: Otherwise I like it, you have a good story going on, and can't wait to see more, that was really my only complaint
Edit: Otherwise I like it, you have a good story going on, and can't wait to see more, that was really my only complaint
I will probably redo the phone and enable rollback in future builds. The reason I disabled it is because after you call your sister, if you rollback, if acts as if the conversation never happened and removes her location from the map. I know it is because I treat the phone as a menu instead of a screen.
- May 9, 2018
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So far I like it. I love that there's real conflict with him being homeless versus the typical White guy in nice big suburban neighborhood whose only real conflict is that the Mom or Sister he's trying fuck suddenly gets a new boyfriend.
The renders are really good and I don't see too many African American characters other than the typical generic bald Black guy with the same face that's used over.. and over... and over again. So kudos to you for introducing a different variety of characters. I love the whole look of the sister Ebony and Jason as well. All in all keep up the good work, keep putting out quality work, and ignore the bias trolls and you may tap into a whole other audience that a lot of Devs can't.
The renders are really good and I don't see too many African American characters other than the typical generic bald Black guy with the same face that's used over.. and over... and over again. So kudos to you for introducing a different variety of characters. I love the whole look of the sister Ebony and Jason as well. All in all keep up the good work, keep putting out quality work, and ignore the bias trolls and you may tap into a whole other audience that a lot of Devs can't.
- Dec 28, 2017
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Plenty of black chicks? A fresh story?
I'm all in!
I'm all in!