X-23 more like X-33 years old lmao gottem
But yeah, de-age her a bit and make her body more toned. Just a little though, no bodybuilder stuff please.
Ren'Py Rogue-like: Evolution [v1.54b] [Oni]
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But yeah, de-age her a bit and make her body more toned. Just a little though, no bodybuilder stuff please.
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Good teaser
although perhaps the face is too old to be X23
perhaps less pronounced features and a more rounded face would improve even more
although perhaps the face is too old to be X23
perhaps less pronounced features and a more rounded face would improve even more
I have to agree with Helivesoncemore. IMO the style looks a lot like a lot of game art coming out that tries to make itself look different but ends up looking the same.
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Looks fine to me, is quite stylized I'd have to say. Keep ongoing maybe in a couple to a few months it'll produce something of merit.
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ok i bet im alone on this but as much as i as i will saying oni kinda yanderedev style atm i... like his style better over this just imo
I'm torn. On the one hand, yeah, I like it, the pose is a good take on the art from the game, the face is great, makes me think of American McGee's Alice, which is a huuuuuge bonus for me (and a suggestion for the game itself, if I may, she needs a cosplay outfit to make her look like the character from the game). If someone posted this in a rec thread, I'd check it out, absolutely. On the other hand though, it still doesn't feel right. The expression doesn't look cocky enough, it's less 'oh, you think you can wear me out? I'd like to see you try, really,' and more 'yeah, I mean, I've got nothing going on after class, so if you wanna hang out for a bit, that'd be cool, I guess'. She's smirking, but it's more like a 'remembering the Gallon of PCP skit from Whitest Kids U Know' kinda thing, remembering a bad joke you heard once. Laura's got an edge to her, something Oni's able to capture surprisingly well. Both of these feel like they've had the rough edges sanded off completely. I don't see that girl openly masturbating at my room door before smearing her juices on my face. I'd like to, don't get me wrong, but I just don't buy it.
As for the body, yeah, I know that that's how someone with an athletic body would look in real life if they posed like that, pudge and all, but this isn't real life, you can get away with rock hard abs all the time in a game like this. The body as a whole needs more definition, it feels flat so far, reminds me of a few other games I've seen with that kind of style. It reminds me of Taffy Tales, more than anything, and that's not a good thing. i think the biggest problem is that Oni has a very comic booky style which works perfectly for a game based on the X-Men. His Rogue is a 1:1 copy of the one from the show, his Jubilee is instantly recognisable, his Jean Grey is also in the game. The art here is excellent, let there be no doubt of that, but i dunno if it works. Especially if you're planning on animating any of it, I can see it having that weird effect you get when people try animating static images and everything looks stretched and weird.
And seconding or thirding or whatever the nail polish. Laura without black nails is like the Girl With The Pearl Earring wearing gold hoops or whatever. It's just wrong, damnit!
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It's up, boys! And in the shittiest paint work possible.
Hot takes?
Hot takes?
Looking at them side-by-side it feels like looking like a TV Cartoon version being compared to the respective comic design
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I have grown too used to the laura we have now and her nervous smile.
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Well I'm probably in the minority but I like Ron Chon's art. Definitely looks like a woman in her very early 20s and not a barely legal teen.
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Most of the girls are encroaching at most 19-21 years of age in the game Oni has m8.
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My man, how can i say this...the game only says college but both rogue and kitty look like they do in the show, and in the show they are teenagers.
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Noooooo, you don't say. Well colour me shocked and surprised.
Left looks like she wants to take me to a biker bar, start a fight and have me fuck her on the pool table amongst all the unconscious bodies.
Right is the inheritor of the Cart Titan.
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On the one hand, the Cart Titan Laura doesn't have much life expectancy. On the other hand, it's the Anon that ends up with that bikerfucker Laura the one with the short lifespan.
Tis' up to the wisest, I guess.