I, for one, really liked the game. Mostly because it is something new, something experimental.
However, I have some critic and some improvement ideas.
First, the controls. Just make them reconfigurable. I mean, you swing the sword from the right side of the screen by pressing the left A button and the right D button controls the shield? That is confusing.
Speaking of confusion, the tone is too dark for what we are doing. To soulslike. Would be fitted for a more brutal theme where sadness is part of the core game play. One of those Japanese horror / guro games for example. Here there is just a disconnect between us trying to swing deadly weapons onto dragonborn and softly kissing them.
Speaking of this, why is there not more to do with the dragonborns?
When you slay a dragonborn there should be some choice. Do I rape this dragon for a lot of health, or just molest it for some? Maybe I can drag it to some pillory in order to have a longer lasting relationship (it is the dark ages after all). To make this work, there should be a timer. You need to deal with the other angry dragonborns quickly or the slain enemy can not be lain. Although you could make that depended on the type. Like the green dragonborns stand around and fap while you rape their colleagues while the red ones still try to introduce you to the sharp end of their stick.
This could tie in into your defeat. Whomever you molested will form an angry line of dragons. Meaning, the more you raped, the more you will be raped.
Which brings me to my biggest point, the slow movement.
When you are defeated the game should not end. Instead, you lose some armor. With that, you become faster and more nimble. But also you loose max health and become more of a dragon slut. Meaning that in the end you do not only die in one hit, have no shield but also are unable to attack. Instead, you only preform cunnilingus on the dragonborns. Which means you are softlocked and this is truly the end.
This way the player starts on hard mode and gradually the game becomes easier till he hits spectator mode.
However I would not let him lay the final dragon, after all dragons have standards and you have to beat the game on hard mode.
To summarize:
-let us adjust the controls
-let us do more with the defeated dragonborns
-let us continue after defeat for a trade of between health and speed