Was alright. A little over the top dramatic and wordy, but not too bad.
But I get it. You're an atheist. I don't care what religion people are, but can we move on without all the preaching? Sorry but that just got really annoying rather quickly. The constant religion bashing and talking about religion and all the people and just all of it, over and over again. It's just a bit too much.
But overall, it's decent if you're into this content. Just as I mentioned before, it's very wordy and
a lot of religion bashing and talk. But hey, if that's your thing then more power to ya. Just not for me is all. Thanks regardless and best of luck with your project.