Due to real life reasons I don't want to talk about I never got around to play 0.03 and 0.04, so I went from 0.02 directly to 0.05 (Hotfix applied). Some typos and bugs:
1)
"your self" should be one word
2)
"you not two" should be "you two", without the 'not'
3)
"imbue mana with" should be "imbue with mana". Surely you mean you "imbue the water crystal with mana", not "imbue the mana woth water crystal", right?
4)
A passability issue with the wall/window
5)
I don't think 'might' should be there, it should be "I'd rather you"
6)
Missing comma after "means"
7)
"take a bath me with" should be "take a bath with me"
8)
Any reason at these spots Yua is blocked by an invisible wall?
9)
"then" should be "than"
10)
That should be either "best friends' emotions" or "best friend's emotions"
11)
"Les' go!" should be "Let's go!"
12)
"then" should be "than"
13)
"scene" should be "scent"
14)
"she never shut up" mshould be "she'd never shut up"
15)
"find go to" should be:
- go find
- go to
- find
One of the three, take your pick.
16)
"are we passed" should be "have we passed", or maybe "are we past"
17)
"You're" should be "Your"
18)
"it natural seperates" should be "it natural
ly sep
arates" (almost missed the typo in separates)
19)
"yua" should be "Yua"
20)
A minor thing, but Till should be 'Til (with a ' in front and one l, not two, sicne it is short for "until")
21)
"thign" should be "thing"
22)
Here if I go further east the screen darkens when Yua is talking, but then stays darkened after she stops talking
That's all the typos. Will post some comments on Discord later.