Ianuda

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I have just started playing the game in question, and I would like to say that presenting the player with a choice on what to do (talk to the two characters on screen) with 2 lines of exposition is awkward. Again, I don't mean 500 lines of exposition (as some games do), but 2 lines are a bit too few in number. At least, tell me that these two characters are in my group - it would be more natural. (Please, don't take it as an offence, it's just a random thought I decided to share in the appropriate thread.)
 

LAKueiJin

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Fuck, I hate Carmen!:mad: No matter what you do feels like she always win, even if you leave her behind and live happily ever after with Crow. At least the satisfaction of killing her in one of the endings was orgasmic!
To each his own. I enjoyed far more completely submitting to her and Crow and getting "Crow's knight" as the ending, where I think you live far more happily-ever-after in luxury serving a dominant Mistress Crow and Lady Valentine... :sneaky:

Nonetheless, one great thing about this game is how weighty each choice truly is when compared to other visual novels - I find it amazing that both people like me, who love submission to powerful women and them destroying everything you are and remaking you for their pleasure as Carmen pretty much does on the full submissive path, and people like you who take pleasure from dominant retribution, can enjoy this VN just as much! (well, at least we can agree the ending was orgasmic, albeit for different reasons :LOL:) It definitely is well-writen and a superbly modular experience!

I have just started playing the game in question, and I would like to say that presenting the player with a choice on what to do (talk to the two characters on screen) with 2 lines of exposition is awkward. Again, I don't mean 500 lines of exposition (as some games do), but 2 lines are a bit too few in number. At least, tell me that these two characters are in my group - it would be more natural. (Please, don't take it as an offence, it's just a random thought I decided to share in the appropriate thread.)
Thanks a lot for recommending this little jewel on the Female Domination Games thread Ianuda - would certainly not have found it otherwise! Cheers!
 
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Ariostebaldo

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To each his own. I enjoyed far more completely submitting to her and Crow and getting "Crow's knight" as the ending, where I think you live far more happily-ever-after in luxury serving a dominant Mistress Crow and Lady Valentine... :sneaky:

Nonetheless, one great thing about this game is how weighty each choice truly is when compared to other visual novels - I find it amazing that both people like me, who love submission to powerful women and them destroying everything you are and remaking you for their pleasure as Carmen pretty much does on the full submissive path, and people like you who take pleasure from dominant retribution, can enjoy this VN just as much! (well, at least we can agree the ending was orgasmic, albeit for different reasons :LOL:) It definitely is well-writen and a superbly modular experience!
Ohh!:confused: I hadn't realised the game was about this fetish, now it makes more sense. I'm sure it's a great game to whom are in this fetish, and even to who isn't like me.
 
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senpak29

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One of those h-games where although the porn is nice, I can't jack off because I'm too invested in the story or characters.
Also makes some of those bad ends real boner killers. At least for me.
 
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TkOHarley

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Great game! Only gripe I have is that it ignores Glasha (big stronk orc lady) almost completely. When it comes to Carmen and Crow, there are a ton of routes and scenes that can be unlocked. But with Glasha there is literally just one scene in the whole game.
I counted the unlocked images in the gallery and out of all 171 images in the game, on 11 involve Glasha. It''s just irritating, when youre trying really hard to create erotic moments with her and the game just brushes over them in favor of Crow (who was clearly the developers favorite).

Even when you get the ending that involves just you and her living together job to job, there is NO bonus scene! Meanwhile, any ending involving Carmen or Glasha gets a whole extra story chapter or 2 dedicated to their sexual exploits. But with big stronk ork lady? Nothing!

Anyway, aside from that, this game is perfect in my opinion. Its rare to find a visual novel where each choice you make has a huge impact on the whole story from that point. There are always different outcomes every playthrough. Just none that involve best girl Glasha :(
 
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Avaron1974

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Great game! Only gripe I have is that it ignores Glasha (big stronk orc lady) almost completely. When it comes to Carmen and Crow, there are a ton of routes and scenes that can be unlocked. But with Glasha there is literally just one scene in the whole game.
I counted the unlocked images in the gallery and out of all 171 images in the game, on 11 involve Glasha. It''s just irritating, when youre trying really hard to create erotic moments with her and the game just brushes over them in favor of Crow (who was clearly the developers favorite).

Even when you get the ending that involves just you and her living together job to job, there is NO bonus scene! Meanwhile, any ending involving Carmen or Glasha gets a whole extra story chapter or 2 dedicated to their sexual exploits. But with big stronk ork lady? Nothing!

Anyway, aside from that, this game is perfect in my opinion. Its rare to find a visual novel where each choice you make has a huge impact on the whole story from that point. There are always different outcomes every playthrough. Just none that involve best girl Glasha :(
Glasha has no interest in him sexually at all.

They are friends and have worked together a long time but that's as far as it goes.
 

Dusky Hallows

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Glasha has no interest in him sexually at all.

They are friends and have worked together a long time but that's as far as it goes.
This is pretty much it, although Glasha would be open to fucking Roman if they didn't work together. Glasha probably has the most self control out of all the characters, but she recognises self control is a difficult thing to actually exercise. It's why she'll fuck Markus while out in the woods or drink a gallon of ale at the pub, but when she's on the job she doesn't take risks. She doesn't fuck Roman, and she's also the only merc who doesn't fuck Carmen, despite Carmen trying several times.

From a narrative perspective, that's the character we wanted, and the story we wanted to tell, but from a gameplay perspective I understand why some people don't like it.
 

T-cup Rex

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Great game and amazing art, thanks Dusky Hallows! Love your focus on making an enticing story. Can't wait to see what you do with Joystick Bliss!
 

ap80485

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Art: 10/10

Writing: 10/10


Thank you for creating this masterpiece of a game, I certainly have not expected that a game I found on a website intended for "leisure" purposes would cause me to be so absorbed into the story and the characters. I really enjoyed the domination/submission scenes between Valentine, Crow, and Roman.


On one hand, I liked the Commander ending, having Crow as your personal toy, but on the other, I disliked how Glasha has to die to reach that ending.


I guess the ending that I would personally think/wish to be canon would be the Abandon ending where everyone abandons the mission and continue their adventures together in Hyde, leading to the Wholesome ending. Even though I would've preferred if the relationship between Crow and Roman isn't vanilla, this is still the best ending since everyone walks away unharmed.
 
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