VN Ren'Py Sassy Girl [v0.5.4] [Hematite]

[Dessolos]

lol all this talk about this update I need to actually finish this update. I skipped the last one I think. When I decided to play it again I took a break right when there was a choice to have sleep sex with the mother seemed like it came right out of left field. Granted I was more taken back by the mothers reaction to well the choice with the sister since my old save was when the choice to not do it was bugged. So another left field option made me decide to finish it slowly lol.

 

[master861]

yea I feel like story kinda rush

Yes, that and why did he change his sister's behavior?
Because in version 0.4.4 when your sister drives away in the limo she tells MC I'll do everything for you my love ,
and in the new version the context changes.

 

[darlic]

I swear I be thinking this game and 2 other games the devs are connected in someway. Monster College and Mech Academy all 3 games update almost around same time and been consistent with each other.

That was my exact same thought while I was playing this game for the first time after playing MC. Similar models, same coding style, similar writing and fonts used...

 

[LGM]

Not bad so far. Here's a few things I noticed:

There are still a bunch of lines with weird sentence structure throughout the script. Besides that, his/her are mixed up every once in a while. I also saw some mislabeled lines, but I neglected to take notes, so you'll have to find them yourself...

Even if you don't get into a conversation with Beatrice, MC will think "(Here's one of the repressed women Beatrice was telling me about.)" first encountering Adele.

If you followed Miriam to her room but left without helping with her vibrator, you'll tell Janine later that you didn't want to help Miriam because of how she had treated you that morning, which is not quite accurate. Also, when Timmy explains about the cameras at Miriam's house, MC comments about helping her with the vibrator.

After the cabin scene with Karen, it's possible (and maybe inevitable?) that the fireplace sounds continue indefinitely.

Finally, I haven't looked into the details around those scenes much, but the bathroom scenes with Beatrice have a potentially weird progression. If you accompany her to the bathroom the first time and only help her with her shirt (no looking at her boobs etc.), that scene ends without anything happening. If you then accompany her for the skirt incident, MC is suddenly way intimate with her out of nowhere, rubbing his crotch against her from behind...

This one is purely my opinion, but the incident with Adele near the end is a bit off, I think. I don't mean the altercation between MC and her, I can see that happening. I mean, MC just tying her up and changing into that ridiculous outfit, before then giving the player the option to back out. I mean, shouldn't we get the option to not even do all this preparation if we don't want to do anything? It just seems like such a weird sequence of events.

Anyway, I'll put this one on my watchlist. I'm curious how it's gonna turn out.

 

[GuardianZ]

Shouldn't the pregnancy tag be added by now?

 

[hysepReC]

Holy shit, this game is hilarious! I laughed so hard when Josephine thanked the MC for raping her, acted like she had changed her attitude and then called Miriam a stupid brainless bitch and a shit mother because she didn't like the car that had come to pick her up.

 

[sunqian3000]

Not bad so far. Here's a few things I noticed:

There are still a bunch of lines with weird sentence structure throughout the script. Besides that, his/her are mixed up every once in a while. I also saw some mislabeled lines, but I neglected to take notes, so you'll have to find them yourself...

Even if you don't get into a conversation with Beatrice, MC will think "(Here's one of the repressed women Beatrice was telling me about.)" first encountering Adele.

If you followed Miriam to her room but left without helping with her vibrator, you'll tell Janine later that you didn't want to help Miriam because of how she had treated you that morning, which is not quite accurate. Also, when Timmy explains about the cameras at Miriam's house, MC comments about helping her with the vibrator.

After the cabin scene with Karen, it's possible (and maybe inevitable?) that the fireplace sounds continue indefinitely.

Finally, I haven't looked into the details around those scenes much, but the bathroom scenes with Beatrice have a potentially weird progression. If you accompany her to the bathroom the first time and only help her with her shirt (no looking at her boobs etc.), that scene ends without anything happening. If you then accompany her for the skirt incident, MC is suddenly way intimate with her out of nowhere, rubbing his crotch against her from behind...

This one is purely my opinion, but the incident with Adele near the end is a bit off, I think. I don't mean the altercation between MC and her, I can see that happening. I mean, MC just tying her up and changing into that ridiculous outfit, before then giving the player the option to back out. I mean, shouldn't we get the option to not even do all this preparation if we don't want to do anything? It just seems like such a weird sequence of events.

Anyway, I'll put this one on my watchlist. I'm curious how it's gonna turn out.

Many people are looking for normal logic. They were complaining about the incoherence and horror of the game.
But if you really understand what the author is trying to do, and understand what schizophrenia is all about,
You will discover the author's great ability to create stories.
As the story progresses, the author is showing the increasingly serious mental state of MC schizophrenia.
my this comment involves spoiler, but if you look at it from a perspective of appreciating good work, it doesn't hurt.
（And, AD 1918. Lu Xun published the first novel written in the vernacular in Chinese, <Diary of a Madman>. everyone can go to read this famous book, help to divergent thinking .）

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[soemantri9]

DEV, YOUR GAME IS SO GOOODDDD.... may i ask how to unlock the scene after adele in chain? thank you

 

[HematiteDev]

DEV, YOUR GAME IS SO GOOODDDD.... may i ask how to unlock the scene after adele in chain? thank you

Currently (update 0.4.8) there is nothing after Adele.

 

[HematiteDev]

Not bad so far. Here's a few things I noticed:

There are still a bunch of lines with weird sentence structure throughout the script. Besides that, his/her are mixed up every once in a while. I also saw some mislabeled lines, but I neglected to take notes, so you'll have to find them yourself...

Even if you don't get into a conversation with Beatrice, MC will think "(Here's one of the repressed women Beatrice was telling me about.)" first encountering Adele.

If you followed Miriam to her room but left without helping with her vibrator, you'll tell Janine later that you didn't want to help Miriam because of how she had treated you that morning, which is not quite accurate. Also, when Timmy explains about the cameras at Miriam's house, MC comments about helping her with the vibrator.

After the cabin scene with Karen, it's possible (and maybe inevitable?) that the fireplace sounds continue indefinitely.

Finally, I haven't looked into the details around those scenes much, but the bathroom scenes with Beatrice have a potentially weird progression. If you accompany her to the bathroom the first time and only help her with her shirt (no looking at her boobs etc.), that scene ends without anything happening. If you then accompany her for the skirt incident, MC is suddenly way intimate with her out of nowhere, rubbing his crotch against her from behind...

This one is purely my opinion, but the incident with Adele near the end is a bit off, I think. I don't mean the altercation between MC and her, I can see that happening. I mean, MC just tying her up and changing into that ridiculous outfit, before then giving the player the option to back out. I mean, shouldn't we get the option to not even do all this preparation if we don't want to do anything? It just seems like such a weird sequence of events.

Anyway, I'll put this one on my watchlist. I'm curious how it's gonna turn out.

Thank you for the reports. I will fix them for the next update.

 

[Dil raju 1996]

Any incest??

 

[Dessolos]

Any incest??

it's a spoiler but yes if you are curious what kind it's mother and sister

 

[Nate D]

can you unlock any more after

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or nah?

 

[Juerhullycin]

can you unlock any more after

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or nah?

You can. You just need to wait for the next update and install it

 

[enzo ferrari]

we need more sassy on our lives

 

[JokerOfTorment]

Love the game so far and enjoyed all the kinks mc can do in it based on the tags and hope to see the next update soon.

Also hope at some point early. In another update, the sister regrets leaving early and reconsiders coming back to the Mc early to be with him, so we get more scenes with her.

 

[Aramintha]

So I binged all this AVN in one siting and I honestly don't know how I feel about it because at the beginning I really liked the story and the relationships with the girls there where hints of romance and the writing was quite nice, but the more I played and got to the current content the whole game turned a massive nosedive the romance is gone and it seems like every character in the game is some sort of psycho.

The writing in the last two updates is really subpar with sentences that sometimes don't make sense and other nonsense as to compare to the beginning of the game, the more I played the more disappointed I became for example you rape the sister and she thanks you for it like wtf lol also what's with the whole gimp suit and the MC keep questioning if he is crazy the game went from slice of life romantic and interesting plot to almost what seems like a horror AVN the latest update is just bizarre.

If you told me that two different people worked on the game I would believe you because the first chapters and the latest chapters are completely different in everything writing, quality and story the further the game goes the worst it becomes, I will continue to play the rest of the game because at this point the only thing that keeps me playing is how this dumpster fire of a story ends.

 

[Dessolos]

So I binged all this AVN in one siting and I honestly don't know how I feel about it because at the beginning I really liked the story and the relationships with the girls there where hints of romance and the writing was quite nice, but the more I played and got to the current content the whole game turned a massive nosedive the romance is gone and it seems like every character in the game is some sort of psycho.

The writing in the last two updates is really subpar with sentences that sometimes don't make sense and other nonsense as to compare to the beginning of the game, the more I played the more disappointed I became for example you rape the sister and she thanks you for it like wtf lol also what's with the whole gimp suit and the MC keep questioning if he is crazy the game went from slice of life romantic and interesting plot to almost what seems like a horror AVN the latest update is just bizarre.

If you told me that two different people worked on the game I would believe you because the first chapters and the latest chapters are completely different in everything writing, quality and story the further the game does the worst it becomes, I will continue to play the rest of the game because at this point the only thing that keeps me playing is how this dumpster fire of a story ends.

Yeah I legit only can play this game now just to see the dumpster fire this game is and see how much worst it can get at this point. It's so bad im curious now. Which reminds me I need to update my review for this at some point.

 

[Aramintha]

Yeah I legit only can play this game now just to see the dumpster fire this game is and see how much worst it can get at this point. It's so bad im curious now. Which reminds me I need to update my review for this at some point.

Yea honestly its the only thing that keeps me playing is how much weirder and crazier it gets because its like playing an AVN on drugs but without needing to be on drugs, everything now in the latest updates is just so batshit crazy I am actually really impressed how the devs managed to fuck the game up so badly and so fast because I legit really enjoyed the first two chapters a lot everything after that was painful to play.

 

[MagnusAxess]

I agree it was nice at the beginning and then just went off the rails.

Also, is there a scene with fucking Dorothy? I fucked everyone else but her it seems.