VN Ren'Py Completed Sassy Girl [v1.0.0] [Hematite]

[Myscho]

The dev is definitely overcooked with this shit bruh, every character in this game is literally have a mental illness like wtf is going on

Standard MO when you dont know what direction your game should take

 

[redsling]

I'm pretty sure Janine was faking being hypnotized. Right before she passes out she calls the MC by his name instead of 'my lord' which is what she was calling him after he 'hypnotized' her. It was more roleplay than rape. I think the rape tag is only there because of the scene with Josephine but even that is more blackmail than straight up rape. I mean, technically, blackmailing someone into having sex of you is a form of rape but they are separate tags for a reason.

She also revealed that she was faking it when you say something she doesn't like. lol

 

[TheDick69+]

No, no and no, well one more, no! A good game disappeared and we got something else. I stopped playing halfway in to the latest update. I couldn't take anymore. Bye!

 

[Adhdclassic]

Why do I feel this is all in the MCs head and he is in a psychiatric ward.

 

[Deleted member 36687]

v0.4.15

 

[Elyñar]

I am usually against remakes mid-development. But this game for me either does it by removing all the mental illness crap or it's dead. With knowledge they can be used, but this game develops it horribly.

 

[ActiveShooter]

Miriam really needs some hardcore punished, because shes is way to proud and delicate. by away I really like the pregnant women gets boom boom boom

 

[Jacowboy]

whoa... the unholy trifecta of bad story, bad writing and bad translations... damn!

gotta admit tho, I'm morbidly curious to see how badly it'll end

 

[Dessolos]

whoa... the unholy trifecta of bad story, bad writing and bad translations... damn!

gotta admit tho, I'm morbidly curious to see how badly it'll end

this is the only reason im not dropping this game tho tbh I rarely drop games

 

[varkatzas666]

Gem of a game, Miriam and Dorothy are my favorite girls, although they are all perfect. I liked that, unlike the thousands of games and VN's that are here, this time, it was the mother(?) who had the incestuous interest in the son. Looking forward to a new update, keep it up dev

 

[Dessolos]

You guys are here to enjoy the game at F95? Or have you come to find trouble with English grammar?
English is not my first language and I failed English exams when I was at school.
But I can understand every sentence of the developer text and feel the whole story he wants to express.
(If you want show the nobility of USA and Europe, you better go to Twitter.In fact, English-speaking countries have been a mess in recent years.)

I never mentioned anything about the writing I have trouble telling the difference from bad or good writing unless it's obvious mistakes and I only understand English. Yeah I do understand everything being said just fine as well. But the story is garbage goes from okay to worst and makes no sense at some points for no reason. Like why would the mother say it was a good punishment for raping the sister and the sister thank him afterwards if you pick that option. That's a big wtf moments and makes zero sense it's random sorry that is pure garbage.

 

[sunqian3000]

I never mentioned anything about the writing I have trouble telling the difference from bad or good writing unless it's obvious mistakes and I only understand English. Yeah I do understand everything being said just fine as well. But the story is garbage goes from okay to worst and makes no sense at some points for no reason. Like why would the mother say it was a good punishment for raping the sister and the sister thank him afterwards if you pick that option. That's a big wtf moments and makes zero sense it's random sorry that is pure garbage.

If you've played his other games,you will know he's good at dark chaotic stories.
The developer is showing the increasingly serious mental state of a schizophrenic MC.
Gentle, normal writing is blasphemy against this story.

 

[Dessolos]

If you've played his other games,you will know he's good at dark chaotic stories.
The developer is showing the increasingly serious mental state of a schizophrenic MC.
Gentle, normal writing is blasphemy against this story.

ah I never have and didn't play really past that point I mentioned . I just want to wait for alot of updates to descend into the madness that is this game. I figured the mother is bioplar or something the sister unsure about

 

[Jacowboy]

You guys are here to enjoy the game at F95? Or have you come to find trouble with English grammar?
English is not my first language and I failed English exams when I was at school.
But I can understand every sentence of the developer text and feel the whole story he wants to express.
If you want show the superiority of USA and UK, you better go to Twitter.
(In fact, English-speaking countries have been clowns for the past few years. When they spend tens of billions fighting someone else's war , the number of homeless people in the USA is staggering. )

Oh fuck, yeah imagine wanting intelligble dialogues in a visual NOVEL... yeah, I'm such a goofball, ain't I?

Also, english is not my first language either and I'm not american or a brit either... I guess I'm just not a donkey

 

[sunqian3000]

Oh fuck, yeah imagine wanting intelligble dialogues in a visual NOVEL... yeah, I'm such a goofball, ain't I?

Also, english is not my first language either and I'm not american or a brit either... I guess I'm just not a donkey

Such a simple story, and you are still complaining because you can't understand it.
not a donkey. What is ?
read some books. NOVEL will do.

 

[Jacowboy]

Such a simple story, and you are still complaining because you can't understand it.
not a donkey. What is ?
read some books. NOVEL will do.

Well, unsurprisingly, you didn't get the point... I DID understand the story... I just happen to think it's very poorly written and all over the place. But it's nice that you like it, tho

 

[sunqian3000]

Well, unsurprisingly, you didn't get the point... I DID understand the story... I just happen to think it's very poorly written and all over the place. But it's nice that you like it, tho

Just because you don't accept it doesn't mean there's something wrong with it.
The chaos in your eyes is just the developer's artistic expression.
If read more novels movies and even DC comics , you will not say those impetuous complaints.

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[Echoesinthedarkness]

I like how these guys dont give any leeway to devs, everything should be made according to their vision/liking, otherwise its a "trash game" with a plot that makes no sense.

 

[Dessolos]

I like how these guys dont give any leeway to devs, everything should be made according to their vision/liking, otherwise its a "trash game" with a plot that makes no sense.

to be fair I never thought it was that great to begin with. But the moment the mother's reaction to her daughter being raped if you go down that path it became trash to me personally and only still playing cause im to damn curious how crazy it's gonna get. Sure the dev might be making it fucked up on purpose to make more a story of mental illness but my issues is it goes to fast to quick out of left field. If the MC was showing signs of it at the start then okay wouldn't of been so bad in my eyes.

 

[Echoesinthedarkness]

to be fair I never thought it was that great to begin with. But the moment the mother's reaction to her daughter being raped if you go down that path it became trash to me personally and only still playing cause im to damn curious how crazy it's gonna get. Sure the dev might be making it fucked up on purpose to make more a story of mental illness but my issues is it goes to fast to quick out of left field. If the MC was showing signs of it at the start then okay wouldn't of been so bad in my eyes.

I mean game starts with mc seeing psychologist (I dont remember this scene in full tbh so might be a bit wrong), so I guess its not that far-fetched?