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Shit, why am I enjoying this crap!
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I appreciate it very much. Thank you. Also thumbs up for for some of the Sassy girls design (not fan of all of them).... I enjoy writing absurd stories, and if many of you don't appreciate them... so be it.
AMAZINGIt would be wonderful for me to use AI to write my AVN. Unfortunately, it's not like that. To be honest, I tried, but the result is that there's so much work in revising and correcting the content that it's pointless to work on it. AIs continuously contradict themselves in what they write, forget what they wrote just a few lines before, and keep repeating the same things.
Regarding the numerous criticisms about the development of my story and the fact that it's degenerated, I remain incredulous. Sassy Girl has always been a crazy story. From the very first scene when the MC imagines having sex with his therapist. The very way in which all the scenes evolve falls into the realm of the absurd.
MC fucks Beatrice under a sink and Karen who is there less than a meter away doesn't notice.... Dorothy allows herself to be persuaded to host a TV show in her underwear.... MC pretends to sleepwalk and Adele gives him a blowjob to prove to Miriam that he is faking it.... Josephine gets raped and then thanks him.
There isn't a single "normal" scene, and I've been very careful to avoid that. I enjoy writing absurd stories, and if many of you don't appreciate them... so be it.
Exactly this. It can be another incest or harem story just as the normal ones out there, no offense because I enjoy the normal ones as well when it has a decent story. But sometimes crazy shit like this just hits me on another level, it's like tasting something unusual once in a while after having normal meal everyday.AMAZING
Everything makes sense now. MC raping his sister, and she falls in love with him after it. His mother being ok with it.
MC couldn't even have sex with a prostitute without shit getting wild. Now that I know its all intentionally crazy, for the story I can enjoy things a lot easier.
Btw, I was enjoying already...
The file I've downloaded from Pixeldrain (Win/Linux) gives me a CRC error. The one from Mega was ok.Sassy Girl [v0.4.17] [Hematite]
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Ah, trying to "logically dissect" a story, which is by it's nature a feat of IMAGINATION and thus not have to follow logical rules, is a bit of a waste of time. This approach shows the inability of the reader or in this case the layer, to simply take the story as presented, within it's own rules and boundaries and gain the benefit of.Whoa, you're the actual dev Hematite? Nice, glad you joined on here.
As the person who arguably gave the biggest criticism, I am excited that you decided to voice your opinion.
Your compact explanation gives reasoning behind the way you set up stories - basically coming from the wish to write up absurd stories. Knowing you actively went out of your way to avoid normal scenes, we can now look at the game differently. I apologize for not having the lens through which you created the vision for the game.
Please, by all means, feel more than welcome to share your vision and approach to how YOU wanted to create the story for Sassy Girl. I can of course always form opinions about your approach, but explanation will help us better understand what the story is you wanted to create. With the knowledge you give us, I'll even replay the game in order to re-evaluate it. Perhaps we can help you give the game a 'pretext' that puts the game into proper context. I'm looking forward to reading from you!
I really wanted to deep-dive on your statements here:
Absurdism can be a very strong trait in video games, and I think we all felt absurd traces in the game. Was there a reason for the specific type of absurd you chose to create?
So far, I have used logic to review a game that clearly makes it a goal to be illogical or irrational. We all thought it to be quite a dark game due to the nature of the mental illness, but perhaps we haven't looked at it in the right way. Maybe story scenes shouldn't have to be connected and don't have to make sense one after another - and that's the story. Personally I have always classed the game as 'being different, almost absurd' as a style choice to tell a bigger story. But if your goal is to create an absurd game, the overarching story really doesn't matter much in a way that it doesn't matter in comedy either.
Top pic is definitely the spear of destiny...Shit, why am I enjoying this crap!You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
Well it takes a while to figure out what the "rules" of this universe are. And if you are fair you have to acknowledge that even the MC is not all that sure what is taking place. Am I enjoying this? Yes. But guessing what is the ultimate outcome is also part of the fun.Ah, trying to "logically dissect" a story, which is by it's nature a feat of IMAGINATION and thus not have to follow logical rules, is a bit of a waste of time.