VN Ren'Py Savior [v0.16c] [Purple Fellas]

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McWoodz

McWoodz

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The renders and animations look great but the Engrish is off the charts.
Really need to get a proofreader on this and make a 100% reduction in OMGs.
I don't know what to make of this. Some of the dialogue was cringy as fuck but I really enjoyed playing it.
I laughed a lot but mostly at parts I wasn't supposed to.
I recommend firing in and giving it a look, brightens up a slow update day.
 
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M'95

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Pizzapockets said:
I laugh at all the comments about bad writing it's a porn game it doesn't need a good story if that's what your here for then you make no sense to me. I just want things I don't get out of other porn.
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Haha, I laugh at you laughing at me............:ROFLMAO:;)

But seriously it is ok (y), I don't need to make sense to you, different strokes and such :)
 
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ivanov95

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It is very good and have great potential, but needs proofreader and to remove these OMG/WTFs from the script... :LOL:
 
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Pizzapockets said:
I laugh at all the comments about bad writing it's a porn game it doesn't need a good story if that's what your here for then you make no sense to me. I just want things I don't get out of other porn.
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So, people are only allowed to be here and comment things we don't get out of other porn or we don't make sense?

Like a good story?
Don't see much of that in porn.

You don't make sense dude:unsure:
 
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Purple Fellas

Purple Fellas

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Thank you for all your comments and suggestions. The first thing I should mention, our native language is not English, we really tried so hard to doing writing part of the game good but we made lots of mistakes. Thank you so much for letting us know.

About dialogs and general writing. Me and my friend work as a two-man team all the decision we make always comes out from our agreement. We read all the comments and the result was; "Renders are really good, scenes are really good, but dialogues and writing are bad." We want to work on that part of the game a lot harder and that's why we need your opinions. Please tell us which part of the game you hate most and why? What would you like us to change about the game? We are open to any suggestions. Please let us know any grammar mistakes you find. This is only 0.1 version of the game so if we are gonna make some changes, now is the perfect time. We want to learn from our mistakes and correct them. We will work really hard on "Engrish:)" part of the game and we would happily accept any suggestion and help. If you want us to make some changes to characters such as "too much tattoo" please let us know. This forum and gaming community will be our biggest support. Thank you guys so much for showing interest in our game.
 
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3.80 star(s) 132 Votes