Lucrezia&Augusto
Just my two cents here:
I like the story and some original ideas you have, plus the fact that's it's based in Italy and not another US history, for a change.
However, I'm still not buying Sandra's and Luca relation nor the blackmail with the principal. I feel it's too rushed, even if I understand from where emotionally both come from. I don't know which word you used it in Italian in
the car scene after she accepted to become a coach. But I find that he asking her if she loves him it's too much, too soon. Maybe "do you like me?", "do you find me attractive?" (because this is Sandra's dilemma at the end) . And as as result of that I'm locked in one of the routes. In this case, her behavior doesn't make sense, because she has rejected him, but she still insist that he stay around. I know nevertheless it's a route that most of the players won't take.
I'm not against Sandra exploring outside, although not yet. I willing to do it later, but you lock the routes too early.