What's up with the author bringing up shitting and farting all the time? It annoyed me in the first part so I thought I would see how long it takes the author to bring it up on part 2 and it's basically right away with the main character complaining about a stomach ache, which goes nowhere from a plot standpoint. Like the stomach ache is literally there just so the main character can say that he took a shit.
I know I don't speak for everyone, but I really don't want farting and shitting anywhere near my erotica.