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VN Ren'Py Completed Second Chance [v1.0] [Maks]

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Coffeecool

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Just after his daughter accoused his wife to bang her own son, without any kind of proof.
MC says "Im glad you stood up for my Mom" (Why in the world should he not behave like that?)
But the best part comes now, Derek replies: "Of course, she is the love of my life. Now if youll excuse me. Its time for me to cheer up with a round of golf" ????????????
that made me almost fall from my chair xD
The writing is so bad its almost good again ^^
 
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i just startet the VN but the pace is gone for good , same thoughts like some posts above...there is not really any story and the patch doesnt work here( in my case)...friend of family ,role model??? and sure u wanna cheat with her but let the door open so the whole family can stay there and watch...really?! what did nicole do to ashley? i bet she fucked her big love or cheat on dad because she´s a nympho... a little too simple...could be a cool VN (mom going after son), maybe a little rework on conversations...but that´s my single opinion
 
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sergesan said:
i just startet the VN but the pace is gone for good , same thoughts like some posts above...there is not really any story and the patch doesnt work here( in my case)...friend of family ,role model??? and sure u wanna cheat with her but let the door open so the whole family can stay there and watch...really?! what did nicole do to ashley? i bet she fucked her big love or cheat on dad because she´s a nympho... a little too simple...could be a cool VN (mom going after son), maybe a little rework on conversations...but that´s my single opinion
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The writing is what you would expect from a typical porn movie, to patch the different sex scences together in some way. But a VN needs more like this, thats the problem here. The story is half the turn on, in this kind of "entertainment"
If the writing sucks, the whole game probably wont work, if it doesnt have tons of stunning scenes in it.
Thats why Ecchi Sensei is so good without being visually impressive.
 
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Coffeecool said:
The writing is what you would expect from a typical porn movie, to patch the different sex scences together in some way. But a VN needs more like this, thats the problem here. The story is half the turn on, in this kind of "entertainment"
If the writing sucks, the whole game probably wont work, if it doesnt have tons of stunning scenes in it.
Thats why Ecchi Sensei is so good without being visually impressive.
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I agree a rework on dialogic might improve the vn. Tho I don't think it will match Ecchi Sensei level of writing.
 
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3.10 star(s) 86 Votes