I think landlady needs to look more like a milf(she looks like a older sister not exactly milf, also pubic hair would be awesome again), also it would be to have scenes where Mc get to support her and rescue her from some situations no netorare of course but some bandits or animals . And he hunting and feeding her would make her see his tenant as a man instead of a child. Oh and some scenes where Mc find mom bathing by luck or spy on her and she doing the same would good.
I believe if you want him to read this you either have to write it on his patreon/discord or put SuperWriter into your post.
His last post here is over a month old, don't know active he is in just reading and maybe by the time he is back here, your post is already buried under a lot of others.
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First, let me say that I enjoy all of Super's games, especially this one. I really like that things are progressing with Norah, but it felt a little dis-jointed. The scene with Paris in the bakery didn't seem to fit. MC has had at least 2 previous encounters with her, one in a family competition and one a couple updates back where they all had lunch, yet he still didn't recognize her. I realize that the first time might have been on the Coral route and the second on the harem route (he didn't recognize her there either), so maybe it was just the introduction into the Norah route... Also, when MC dealt with Bozo and Mini-Me, why was he so nervous? He dealt with Yakuza and his father and handled that, why be on edge now? Call dad and find out what the hell is going on. If dad want's his legacy to prevail, he'll give MC the info he needs to kick ass and extend the family name... Regardless, it's still a good read and I look forward to the next update! Nicely done SuperWriter!
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MC wasn't there during the lunch, it was just the girls.
Pretty sure that was the only update Paris was in. The competition was Sasha and Miracle.
Not the only one.
A few devs have stopped responding on here, some have left the site completely. A lot of others have started ignoring certain people and groups mainly those that complain about certain content or demand changes.
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1. Father / Dad
2. Sister
3. Brother
4. Stepmother / Stepmom
5. Mother / Mom
6. What you like
7. Family
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Took awhile, due to computer problems I had a few months ago, but got done with 0.14, and as such, caught up with the Dev on this game.
Anyways, glad to be caught up again, thank you for this game, and looking forward for the next one.
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Anyways, glad to be caught up again, thank you for this game, and looking forward for the next one.
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I went back through and sure enough you are correct, MC wasn't at the lunch. So there was only one possible time he met Paris before this event. The competition actually took place in the harem route of Picture Perfect about half way through the harem update (Coral and SS MC vs Sabrina and PP MC dance off). Since there's no time reference, it's possible that the MC hasn't actually met her yet because the part of that story may take place after the incident in this story. Thanks Avaron1974, now it doesn't seem so dis-jointed.
In patreon-friendly (as in this totally isn't what it looks like it's not incest don't ban me please patreon) speak, "landlady/landlord" = mom/dad, "tenant" = daughter/son, "roommate/best friend" = brother/sister (and "neighbors" = aunt/uncle/cousins). So you got the first and last one right, but the apocalypse one is "a father and his daughter surviving a nuclear holocaust after his wife died".
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the game is very good I liked the plot the characters are coolly made the environment is also super done and the game is made conscientiously and this means the developer loves his game success to him and a lot of fans to him and great health
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wow this game is amazing congrats to the developer
i hope that in future game projects it keeps the same incest game footprint m/s
i hope that in future game projects it keeps the same incest game footprint m/s
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if any of his games have incest for me, it doesn't have to be all of them
I don't know the other games of this developer but this game pleased me a lot
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Then you'd like Picture Perfect.
That's the game with the family in that this family meet. Dad and daughter incest.
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Might have been said already but it desperatly needs music.. its good so far but the lack of music kinda makes the reading a little empty as music can add to a scenes emotional draw.. Also you might wanna add the banner pic as your title screen given tht the pic looks like an excellent movie poster and FAR better than the current game one