For a game where choices are supposedly going to matter, it kinda sucks that we don't get to name the MC.
It's short at the moment but it's not bad, some grammar issues here and there, and personally not a huge fan of fading in/out of black, it's either too slow or too fast (feels like a screen flickering instead).
There's always this need to use every transition effect available at some point in a dev's experience, but sometimes less is more. What you use most of the time, is what players are used to. If you start inserting new transition effects they better be significant enough of a scene change to warrant the use, otherwise it's breaking up the normal experience for no reason.
Looking forward to seeing how the choices will matter, since that's usually as many times more work as there are branches.