Fetishes in game:
Game is great, but it has its flaws, yet they're easily forgivable.
Renders 4/5 - This renders are well done. They're much better than most renders out there. However, there are some uncanny valley moments with the mothers face. The Mother seems to have an issue with the eyes. First thing is to try different eye shader settings in DAZ, use the spot render tool to save time. Compare the various different renders with different eye shaders until it looks right, through this process you should be able to immediately see the problem. Try getting a hold of G8.1F and using her eye shader. Another issue is that the total face morphs used might be exceeding 100% from existing face models. Example:
Susan: 80%
Barbara: 30%
Tonya: 50%
You don't want the total to go over 100%, or you get bad uncanny valley effect.
Also, the eyes cannot be too big. Natural instinct is to make big beautiful eyes, but often times one inadvertently creates the ALIEN eye effect. Make sure the eye's stay within human size. Eye size should rarely go beyond 5% IMO, other artists may disagree
The sexbot's waist seems too narrow in an odd way that doesn't feel right, causing uncanny valley effect. It's not that bad, but others have mentioned it too, so that should be addressed, but it's not the end of the world if it's not addressed.
Story 4/5 - Story ideas are WILD and RAW. The developer is not afraid to take risks with doing things that are crazy. That's to be commended. The jokes are fantastic. However, here are some problems I noticed.
- The mother's response to him getting a sexbot is too casual, it doesn't feel real, unless it's established before hand that it's normal for most guys to get a sexbot. Her initial response should be one of shock IMO. Then her second instinct should be to feel some kind of jealously. Since the mother seems attracted to the sexbot, the sexbot could eventually detect the mom's attraction to her, and use that to her advantage to perhaps overcome jealously. Then later, they reconcile, because the sexbot is helping improve the son, and this makes the mom happy.
- The sexbot's femdom tone is VERY aggressive, borderline violent. I would tone down the aggression. She doesn't need to be that aggressive, because she knows the MC is a virgin, wimpy, and timid. She knows that she holds all the cards because she is the object of his desire. She could easily get him to do whatever she wants with a slightly less aggressive tone. Dominance can easily be sensed in subtlety, calm and control. If the MC challenged her authority in a MAJOR way, then maybe her super aggressive tone could then be justified, but he seemed very chill, passive and unchallenging, so her highly aggressive tone seemed unwarranted.
I normally don't leave a review like this, but the developer did such a great job, it deserves a thorough review. I 'm really looking forward to where this game goes!
He should FIGHT THE URGE to add more female characters. Do not add more female characters and focus on fleshing these ladies out.
The writing in the beginning is so interesting, it actually kept my attention. This means the dev could go slower if he wanted and flesh things out more before getting to the H-Content. The mother all of a sudden sitting on the MC's face was way too soon IMO.
Still, overall highly entertaining game! If the goal was to give plaeyrs a taste to try and reel us in, well, IT WORKED! nice!