Ren'Py SexNote [v0.23.0b] [JamLiz]

[Jamliz]

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Hey guys! Thanks for trying the game once again and leaving your comments and recommendations, although I cannot answer 100% of the time I do read everything you write and we take your advice for improvement (Those who have followed the game since the beginning will know that the game has progressed and improved a lot thanks to all your recommendations and suggestions.)

I know that some of you may be dissatisfied by not seeing the specific content you want, but I ask you to understand that game development is a process that takes a long time of work in various areas. What started as a hobby, has become something in what we can currently spend a little more than half time on (We are not a team of large developers or experts, we are just two guys working and improving the best we can) Do not expect from us results equal to that of large projects, we have been in Patreon for very little time in comparison and we are working to improve more and more.

Regarding your questions, here is an answer to what each of your concerns could be:


Hinn's mother change:

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Many characters in the update:

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Initial characters have not been developed:

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The game needs urgently to focus:

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This update doesn't have new content:

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Once again, thank you for your time and comments, I hope you understand and appreciate the time and effort behind this. Thank you very much for your support and recommendations.

JamLiz

 

[Double cheeseburger]

Love the art, but your writer is doing an awful job, and i'm really sorry to say that. the overall quality of the new update is dropped drastically by literally every line of dialogue having at least one grammar or punctuation mistake. not to mention the absurd structure of some sentences. it seems as if the writer for the new update is a refugee from africa, with a narrow understanding of how english language works. sometimes i can't believe that some of this made it's way into the final product. please redo the dialogue in the latest 0.8 update. i can do it, if you wont be able to find anyone good for the job. i wont ask for any compensation nor credit. i just really don't want to see this game plagued by such bad writing.

 

[Demoness_Kiss]

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a decent answer, thanks

 

[Arthoneceron]

Stuff

I mean no disrespect, of course. I like your game, and I also follow your other networks, including twitter and the facebook. I was just wondering that many of the storylines weren't developed in the way that I was expecting, but that was just a personal opinion. I mean, even being an asshole, I liked the stepmom for example, and I was wondering what would happen after her and mom broken up. Your artstyle is fantastic and I know that you guys are small compared to other big games around, but I was just venting some thoughts about the story so far.

Since your planning is to create all the characters first and then develop the stories later, I will not complain about this point anymore and I wish for your success!

 

[Jamliz]

Love the art, but your writer is doing an awful job, and i'm really sorry to say that. the overall quality of the new update is dropped drastically by literally every line of dialogue having at least one grammar or punctuation mistake. not to mention the absurd structure of some sentences. it seems as if the writer for the new update is a refugee from africa, with a narrow understanding of how english language works. sometimes i can't believe that some of this made it's way into the final product. please redo the dialogue in the latest 0.8 update. i can do it, if you wont be able to find anyone good for the job. i wont ask for any compensation nor credit. i just really don't want to see this game plagued by such bad writing.

I'm sorry for the bad experience, our first language is Spanish, We aren't refugees from Africa, but we are normal guys from South-America. We have someone who helps us with proofreading and is working on that right now. Thanks for your advice.

 

[Sukme]

I'm sorry for the bad experience, our first language is Spanish, We aren't refugees from Africa, but we are normal guys from South-America. We have someone who helps us with proofreading and is working on that right now. Thanks for your advice.

I'm sorry, is it just me or does the one complaining about grammar/punctuation not have a problem w/ both in their post?
Liking the game Jamliz.

 

[amd_dman]

Way too many characters. This is the literal definition of feature creep that plagues all games. It looked like it was going to be a decent game but with adding 3+ characters (**SIX** this update) on each update, I fear this game is going to go into the depths of feature creep hell with no viable content being added.

 

[Jamliz]

Way too many characters. This is the literal definition of feature creep that plagues all games. It looked like it was going to be a decent game but with adding 3+ characters (**SIX** this update) on each update, I fear this game is going to go into the depths of feature creep hell with no viable content being added.

Many characters in the update:

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[Miðgarðsormr]

It seems that i am blind. I can't find sisters office and have no clue what to do. Can someone explain to me what i do wrong? Tanks in advance

 

[Sukme]

It seems that i am blind. I can't find sisters office and have no clue what to do. Can someone explain to me what i do wrong? Tanks in advance

You mean 'step mom's' (blonde in the hallway in afternoon?) work office? It's in the same building as the therapist - to the left of the hospital.(use elevator)

 

[Miðgarðsormr]

You mean 'step mom's' (blonde in the hallway in afternoon?) work office? Its in the same building as the therapist - to the left of the hospital.

Now i feel dumb. Thanks but i honestly didn't see it xD

 

[Deleted member 1019532]

'Mom' goes down on MC, gets a mouthful (and then some) of cum. Why doesn't he return the favor and bury his face between her thighs?

 

[BupoTiling03-Retired]

...should be DDos-ing him (bc we can't go under his house with torches and clubs XD)

*DDoSing, Just my OCD kicking in.

this is different code then in OP....

And those two were mentioned two posts above my first about it. Probably didn't read the thread or read the version those codes were for?

 

[Demoness_Kiss]

*DDoSing, Just my OCD kicking in.

read my signature u.u

Spoiler: Not native english-speaker, when i'm in doubt i connect stuff like this: DDoS-ing (bc i don't know if there is the verb of "doing a DDoS attack")

 

[Jamliz]

read my signature u.u

Spoiler: Not native english-speaker, when i'm in doubt i connect stuff like this: DDoS-ing (bc i don't know if there is the verb of "doing a DDoS attack")

By the way... Really?

 

[Demoness_Kiss]

By the way... Really?

about what?

 

[Zkorey]

non patreons can not use cheat codes?

 

[aonotsukune85]

thx

 

[SkylerRuin]

Anyone have an android version for thisupdate that doesnt have strange visual artifacts? I appreciate the tey with the unofficial port but i didnt like seeing whitw blocks with floating eyes and mouths. It broke the immersion...

 

[Sukme]

about what?

clubs, torches and DDoSing i would surmise.